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2021-02-18 11:56

Grammar is alright, but other than that . . . why in the absolute doodoo is it locked after ONLY 3 CHAPTERS????? How are readers supposed to know the plot or if they even like it enough to spend coins on it after only reading 3 CHAPTERS?????

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Blodnovskinny
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Afolabi_Mubarak
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Sorry for that, it was a mistake, and it's been rectified. Thanks for the comments.

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Kiraran
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I love how the author took the time to describe her characters! Even making sure that the heroine's background and social status. Lokun seems like a really nice guy. hehe dibs!

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Patty_Egah_Ikwue
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This inspiration may seem like fiction, but paints a very true picture of obscurity face by those who are mostly rich. The author painted a very good picture of what most rich people are confronted with.. Despair is like a spear in the heart, your money cannot tame... This work is indeed a excellent piece to be reckon with. I sincerely recommend it as good read Kudos author! Best of luck

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R39_ANANYA_S_BIJU
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I love the plot... its truly spectacular.. keep up the good work .. the characters are resounding and so is the story... its worth anyone's time!!

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Lancee
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Creative Writing skill, the story develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful .good use of words that complement the theme of the story.

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Joondabest_
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The storyline seems so interesting, I also liked the way the author described the characters. This was a whole new concept and a new read for me. The vocabulary was on point. Keep going :)

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miss_polarity
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Woah, the synopsis. That is really commendable! I know I will be looking forward to this one. But I cannot afford to wait so author, fighting! Keep the chapters coming😁😁

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Lottie_Cnozy
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Hey, your fellow author here! The synopsis garnered my interest and even more so from the first chapter. The mysteriousness behind the "fish people" is just enough to intrigued me to keep on reading. The author did a good job out of that. The flow of the story is smooth and the descriptions of the characters are good. The way the author wrote the character, it enabled us readers to understand them and get to know them on a higher level. The story is very creative and it keeps readers on the edge of their seat. Keep up the good work!

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Adelynne_Valerie_3783
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i like the sypnosis and the story is interesting. chapter 1 and im already hooked with the novel.. the author is a good writer..i love fantasy genre and this novel is absolutely fun to read.

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