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Dugzaw
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2021-01-13 22:51

I commend the writer for creating such a great piece of work. The synopsis completely hooked to me and urged me to start the first chapter. The summary is similar to some thing that I've watched on Netflix; it is like a horror movie in the making. I love suspense and thrill. The writing is seamless and professional; I love your narration from the beginning and the fact that you introduce a lot of characters but not in a confusing way. Bisi seems like a mysterious character herself and I cannot wait to learn more about our protagonists. Zaynab is interesting and I like the friendship between Zay and Bisi. Lukon is possibly the love interest but with that possibly comes darkness and secrets. I am a bit apprehensive when it comes to his siblings: Kunbi and Shumbunmi. Great names by the way. I am savinf this story! I cant wait for updates!

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I love how the author took the time to describe her characters! Even making sure that the heroine's background and social status. Lokun seems like a really nice guy. hehe dibs!

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Creative Writing skill, the story develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful .good use of words that complement the theme of the story.

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Grammar is alright, but other than that . . . why in the absolute doodoo is it locked after ONLY 3 CHAPTERS????? How are readers supposed to know the plot or if they even like it enough to spend coins on it after only reading 3 CHAPTERS?????

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The storyline seems so interesting, I also liked the way the author described the characters. This was a whole new concept and a new read for me. The vocabulary was on point. Keep going :)

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Woah, the synopsis. That is really commendable! I know I will be looking forward to this one. But I cannot afford to wait so author, fighting! Keep the chapters comingšŸ˜šŸ˜

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Hey, your fellow author here! The synopsis garnered my interest and even more so from the first chapter. The mysteriousness behind the "fish people" is just enough to intrigued me to keep on reading. The author did a good job out of that. The flow of the story is smooth and the descriptions of the characters are good. The way the author wrote the character, it enabled us readers to understand them and get to know them on a higher level. The story is very creative and it keeps readers on the edge of their seat. Keep up the good work!

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i like the sypnosis and the story is interesting. chapter 1 and im already hooked with the novel.. the author is a good writer..i love fantasy genre and this novel is absolutely fun to read.

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