Item: Visitors
Rating: 5
Author: Lottie_Cnozy

Lottie_CnozyLv23yr

2021-01-14 15:56

Hey, your fellow author here! The synopsis garnered my interest and even more so from the first chapter. The mysteriousness behind the "fish people" is just enough to intrigued me to keep on reading. The author did a good job out of that. The flow of the story is smooth and the descriptions of the characters are good. The way the author wrote the character, it enabled us readers to understand them and get to know them on a higher level. The story is very creative and it keeps readers on the edge of their seat. Keep up the good work!

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