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Duck_God
Duck_GodLv54yr
2021-04-29 11:06

story has been great so far till he met a half elf girl in a pub or something somehow he ask her to be his travelling partner and reveal his secrets to her at the same time giving her a legacy class i don't get it isn't he supposed to be careful and be suspicious to everyone even though they're an npc they're still real living beings and now he just gives away almost all his secrets just because she was a cheery girl with and honest personality in his eyes? i felt like he just drops away all his guards to a girl in a pub for some reason

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Venerabe_Yun
Venerabe_YunLv3

Thx for info

50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

What chapter

Eugene_Zuev
Eugene_ZuevLv3

Thx 4 warning

GooseOverlord
GooseOverlordLv15

I just got to this part and I‘m finding it a little weird. I’m wondering if this continues. Adding random characters

shv_luffy98
shv_luffy98Lv5

hi.. any updates if you continued reading the novel?

GooseOverlord:I just got to this part and I‘m finding it a little weird. I’m wondering if this continues. Adding random characters
GooseOverlord
GooseOverlordLv15

I ended up dropping it eventually, I forget why but obviously things got worst

shv_luffy98:hi.. any updates if you continued reading the novel?
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Overall, a very entertaining story. The Author got a nice way to develop his view of the overused theme VRMMORPG + Reborn MC + OP Knowledge/stats and mixes elements of many different styles. I'll try to summarize without spoilers: PROs: * Elements mixed from Game stories, apocaliptical stories, RPG, etc. * Good background construction and use of background elements - author could make a better descriptions of citys and sites the MC visits, like describing architeture, climate, but, even so, it's not bad the way it is now. * There are many misteries about the world and development of the story, but the author answers a part of this relatively fast. New dramas are constructed in a smooth way, so that we readers keep entertained. CONs: * Writing quality at the beggining is poor, with a lot of grammar errors. It gets better, especialy after 100 chapters. *MC, sometimes, makes stupid decisions, and repeat some nonsenses. In regards of personality, I guess it's ok (there are times i think he looks to be a psyco). But, stuff like having inventory function, and always hunting for food, even knowing that he cant cook. BTW, he could buy any cooking skill in his travels, or some seasoning! * Author has a nasty habit of tricking his readers with comments outside the author's comment area, and using excessively stat and quest views to increase word count and get paid for text that shouldn't be in the story. BTW, this practice makes me not give 5 stars in all the stories I rate with this practice when they go premium.

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