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AusyLust
AusyLustLv122yr
2022-12-29 11:22

I stopped reading after Chapter 90. Sadly, despite its enormous promise, this is one of the most irritating and aggravating stories I've ever read. The narrative of the story is its strongest and greatest point. On the other side, the execution could have been better. Mc's stupidity demonstrates this. Who continued making the same strange decisions? The Mc? He is, in fact, the one in question. Why is this so awful and aggravating? The author clearly places the protagonist in perilous positions and forces him to make rash decisions for the purpose of the story's growth. That makes sense; after all, it is the author's obligation to keep the plot going. The issue is that it came out as somewhat artificial and forced. It was irritating that the main character (MC) kept having these awful occurrences occur one after the other (It may be just the pacing). Still, I wish the writer the best of luck. The story may get better in the later chapters.

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I really like this author. The plots, characters and everything. Actually . I was already interested in this book since prologue.anyways, Keep it up :)

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I will start by saying I only read what was free. I like the idea behind this story and the general world background. The MC gets everything through plot armor with no real sense of a struggle. The fight scenes don’t give me a sense of anticipation or struggle and fall flat. He gets all these titles handed to him and there is no character building yet. Also the characters background is so out there it makes it unrelatable to me as a reader. A thesaurus would also go a long way in improving the writing quality. Basic grammar mistakes are riddle in each chapter and at times tye wrong word is used outright. I understand this is probably not a native English speaker so get an editor you already are getting paid for chapters so the least you can do is have quality grammar

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