AusyLust

Some pointless crisis, bro freqking out over nothing….fuck rick and his group, Mc focus on his….how is that difficult?

Why is he saving dumb asses, this shit ruined the nice lil progress the story was starting out with

He turning into a Chinese protagonist slowly…soon he gonna just do whatever then girls want

Bro unlocked killer instinct… finally. But let’s be real—if Mike, Conor, or Floyd almost dropped someone for good, you think they’d be lookin’ in a mirror, cryin’ about an opponent? Hell no. They’d turn that into a weapon, a straight-up warning to the next poor bastard who steps in their way. That’s the difference between a champion and a wannabe. And it seems like MC is either learning that or finally growing into it. I’m glad you went down this route, but honestly? Still feels like both situations ( like his fights almost killing and him being afraid ) shoulda happened in a less important match—like a spar, and then maybe a street fight. Something off the books in a less controlled environment so it makes sense why it's weighing on him so much. I get it, almost killin’ someone is gonna mess with anyone’s head, but this guy’s an athlete, on his second life, with a damn template system. His mental resistance should be higher than most. PTSD, or any sorta anxiety about killing someone in a boxing ring just didn't add up. It felt forced. In the ring? C’mon. That’s the job. That’s what people come to see. Some fans are literally hoping to watch someone get laid out for good and never get up I know I have…( Paul brothers). So his reaction? Yeah, didn’t feel like it came from a champion mindset. If that’s what you’re aiming to build toward, cool—but it’s gotta be handled smoother, with more weight behind it. He came off kinda pathetic, and it made all his previous antics and tough-guy behavior feel shallow and pointless. It was like watchin’ a badass warrior with a second life have an existential crisis over killin’ someone on a battlefield he asked to be in. Bro… that’s literally what you trained and damm near wished for with prior knowledge of what you were getting into with a system.

Keep the 3rd wish….him being op is fine, he can have many other challenges in life, including romance, business, industry drama, and a whole bunch of other shit. The 2nd wish if it was for Alex as a soul mate, think it should be changed to like Acting Mastery or give Jack Reacher or John Wicks skills, send that boy to the military…add like NCIS, Criminal Minds, or Rookies to the universe. After his boxing career, he becomes a cop or something, you as the author gonna get annoyed with his consistent wins, this way mc can change careers but keep the badass op boxing skills, and have harder challenges in the fighting aspects of the story.

So many female characters and you gotta genderbend, sus…..something wrong with some the authors on this site

Decent story for the author to completely ruin it at the end…sad cause the story has a lot of potential other than the fact, it focus on Tony Stark too fucken much. He's not the Mc, we as the readers don't care about him as much. Other than that, I think the story was fine. Not great or good but a fine one.

Why not women in black….bro fucked up

Overall decent story, I think everything fell apart for me around when Solomon meets the artist chick…its the way the author went about it just leaves a bad taste in your mouth…how tf is this annoying lil girl who makes Jon snow looks like a Titian from myths but compare to Solomon as an equal…those are the author's words….i have never wished for an author to switch characters fast asf…rewrite with Gilgamesh

Bro fucked up the entire story