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AusyLust

AusyLust

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  • AusyLust
    AusyLusta day ago
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    This author is dumb 😂😂😂😂😂

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust2 days ago
    Posted

    Wtf is this format it correctly at least…each chapter is like a paragraph long lol, idk if this was a joke but the concept is actually amazing, hopefully its rewritten id definitely read it

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust3 days ago
    Commented

    Why didn't bro choose omni-man?…avenger when your friends name is superman 💀

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust3 days ago
    Posted

    Oh god. You ever watch someone get this close to perfection, then completely fumble the bag so bad the whole project goes left? Like, so far left it’s unrecognizable? Yeah, that’s this story in all its essence. MC is set up to be strong from the start—not super OP, but powerful, right? Just needs to train a bit, right? But nah, bro’s first thought in a new world ain’t training, ain’t mastering his skills—it’s going on a damn adventure. Like, priorities, my guy. And let’s talk about this devouring power. Dude has the ability to consume and grow stronger, but he just… doesn’t use it? Low-key feels like the author forgot about it ‘cause we don’t even see it pop up until five chapters later. Like, why set up something that raw just to ignore it when it matters? Worst part? The plot situations. MC keeps gettin’ put in spots where he’s forced to be someone’s bitch or just randomly weak as hell. I see what the author’s tryna do—build a world that feels massive, make the MC’s journey feel earned, let him grow into his OP potential. But the execution? Painful. The pacing and decision-making got me side-eyein’ every chapter. Feels like this could’ve been fire if it just stuck to its strengths. But instead? It’s fightin’ itself every step of the way.

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust3 days ago
    Replied to GreedHunter

    Haha it happens but keep it up man, just make sure to plot things out if you need too and figure out a sense of where you want character development to go.and then I feel like u Gucci, story got everything. Good luck

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust4 days ago
    Commented

    Yooo all I see is bro pulling out that fucken rod (pause) when devils pop up to his house swinging that bitch back away you demons, holy overkill 😂😭

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust4 days ago
    Replied to GreedHunter

    Ou nah thats on me didnt realize he was as strong as Anos or well stronger than starting out (went back to chapter 1 and re-read it). But I was saying it didn't make sense cause I thought he was weaker, idk, if I know Imma end up battling other families, not gonna help them unless there was a deal like the families, could never go to war. Since he never did anything like that idk, kinda naive for someone the demon king powers no? But also makes sense him being over powered and shit seing them as competition. I was just curious about the reason why ya know.

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust4 days ago
    Replied to Renegade_Lemur

    Lmao, “spy on God if he could”—you got me there. But nah, they do care about image. Batman and Robin both understand that, as non-superpowered figures in a world full of gods and monsters, their reputation is part of their power. It keeps villains in check and gives the public something to believe in. That said, Robin ain’t the type to let “image” stop him from doing what needs to be done. If there’s a choice between looking good and getting results? He’s picking results every time. If something didn’t add up, he’d dig into it—public perception be damned. Still doesn't mean it can't be used against him, and if he don't care doesn't mean the other Titians won't. If their leaders image is tarnished it'd be near impossible for them to do their hero work in the same capacity. But fuvk all that I see what you mean tho by they didn't listen.

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust5 days ago
    Replied to DaoistMdFPvj

    Happy someone sees it….as I said before he looks like a passive-aggressive bitch lashing out now…..i mean like couldn't he have asked them to leave? Or threaten through legal action hitting them where it really hurts…their puplic perception….then before they leave say something that makes even robin and all of them feel, Batman, superman etc are worthless heroes compared to even normal firefighters.

  • AusyLust
    AusyLust5 days ago
    Posted

    Ain’t a horrible story, not at all—but man, this has one of those plots where someone who shouldn’t be so easily swayed just is, and it kills the whole vibe. It’s the same frustration as when every damn Marvel fanfic MC somehow ends up as the Ancient One’s disciple ‘cause she threatens to seal ‘em or some other lazy-ass plot device. Like, bro, you got all this power, all this potential, and you’re just rolling over? Nah, miss me with that. Same thing here—X-Men situation had the same issue. The setup had great potential, but the execution? Painful. Like, my head actually hurts from how avoidable this was. One tweak, a little more backbone in the writing, and this could’ve been fire. Instead, it’s just frustrating to read it all play out.