I’m out….was hella good so far keep it up….(not fan of multiverse chats )

And I’m out

It’s sad at this point

I wanna transmigrate into the story to slap the mc and say your a fucken dragon and dark lord not a fucken doormat ..bro little too wishy-washy meaning man’s quick to switch up too fast…he was manipulated and tricked like twice and was cool with cause of benefits some little story….some bitch behavior….idk maybe I excepted too much read up to like 312….wouldn’t recommend…has potential if the Mc personality was rewritten to be a bit more prideful (like warriors pride type shit)

When is bro looks gonna change?

Sorry bro I get that but the way your writing it doesn't show it at all… there could be little suggestions to show it…..

Makes no sense why bro gotta stick close to the plot….just shows a lack of creativity on the author's part…seems like it could be a nice story….but what's the point of this fanfiction if he’s just going to just follow the Orignal plot. Like tf…We could just go read the original….very disappointing. Good luck tho

Not ideal, but it'll do. Idk if I can keep on reading. Good luck to author

Now I remember why I dropped the novel. Bro shouldn't have easily forgiven them…kinda wack

Since no one gonna say it bro got reincarnated as a boss baby 💀😂

Nice, I can see improvement in ya writing style. Keep up the good work.

Ahhh that’s the mc we love…had me scared first few chapters

I wanna punch Mc in the throat

Please tell me that means bro is gonna rescue all Mermaids and fish folk captured by celestial dragons, and make them eternally loyal.

Not gonna lie his skill is mad disappointing.

Neutral, but if you decide to be allies, please remember we're here to read your character’s story, not Cheon Yeon Woo’s (lot of authors seem to forget that and start sucking off the og Mc)

I love Aunty

Facts

Thx for the chapter broski