OrionLustalot

Why join Luffy? Basically not even a fanfic anymore, not its just luffys adventure plus an oc….could have just joined the Marines or form his own crew…

It's like the people who write these fanfics on this site emotional iq are low or something….even with the reincarnation having the mind of an adult, with his attachment to his mother, he without a doubt have treated Gildarts differently, either outright anger or indifference for a long time till he got over it.

Why join luffy? Fanfic now ruined….

Plus him being a Senju/Uzamaki and being ignored by Mito, living where he lived, be a little annoyed, maybe upset or something

Honestly one of the best translation fanfics in here, definitely could use some tweaks and going back doing a little more rewriting, also ensuring the power scaling is better, but overall its probably one of the best, especially for One Piece. Good job to the translator/author.

Honestly it’s a great concept but he should be able to choose who he works for….if he became the butler of Lex Luther as a way to get back at Alfred and Bruce, that would have been amazing….honestly if you do a rewrite you could have an great ass story on your hands…

Shouldn’t he have joined the fire one, he could have eaten lots of flames, kinda dumb no?

This chapter was gross asf, when did he sleep with crocodile? Isn’t that a man….i guess gotta find a new Hanma fic

Nah. We finna read it, call it great if it’s great and trash if it is trash — because giving your Mc Hercules essence and Garps talent just to make him a lapdog isn’t ’your story’ it’s wasted potential. Heavy is the head that wears the crown, and you dropped it like your Mc….A writer’s characters reflect them (at times even if just pieces of them) — and your Mc with damn near Godly potential and talent waiting for another man to decide his fate….says a lot about you.

ABSOLUTE CINEMA!! lol definitely the best Douluo fanfic I’ve read, l saw absolutely no flaws, I’m curious to see how he’ll interact with that fake prince (the popes daughter) I always forget her name…that’s usually when these fanfics get weird. Anyways good luck and great read