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FlammableFire
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2021-05-05 05:18

The prologue is awesome, the story and world have great potential, and I would seriously like to see that potential fulfilled. It just has one glaring issue, the MC. He is like frustration incarnate. If frustration was a sin then he is the demon whoes job is to induce as much as possible. I've been able to deal with stupid MCs for a few dozen chapters before... But this guy, just after half a dozen chapters, I already wanted to crawl through my phone and beat him myself!

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The hero is so stupid and everything happens to him just because of luck

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MAZINO_NALv2

No, but chapter 20 honestly, I noticed MC is a bit stupid even though I liked the story and other things

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