I will start by saying I only read what was free. I like the idea behind this story and the general world background. The MC gets everything through plot armor with no real sense of a struggle. The fight scenes don’t give me a sense of anticipation or struggle and fall flat. He gets all these titles handed to him and there is no character building yet. Also the characters background is so out there it makes it unrelatable to me as a reader. A thesaurus would also go a long way in improving the writing quality. Basic grammar mistakes are riddle in each chapter and at times tye wrong word is used outright. I understand this is probably not a native English speaker so get an editor you already are getting paid for chapters so the least you can do is have quality grammar
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thanks for actually saying something about the review as opposed to other people, but I just wanted to say authors get paid barely anything for writing these and even the top writers can struggle if they choose to make this their job, which is why they will always ask for votes and people to read premium chapters, so more people see the book and they get a small cut of whatever is spent on their book. It is also why lots of bigger authors write multiple books at once even if it's a struggle to get enough chapters out for them. Really it's all just down to the predatory system that is webnovel and their contracts; they can afford to pay so little due to having barely any competition. And while I can't pretend to know how much this specific author is earning for this, paying editors can cost a lot, and considering the baseline quality for books here, is mostly unnecessary. Sorry if this seemed a little accusatory btw, just wanted to get this out somewhere
