Review Detail of Ashmodai in I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
Review detail
The author doesn't even research the character he is using as his MC. Apparently Voldemort was born with red eyes, which is just dumb he had green eyes that became red through rituals after he was in Hogwarts. And the author seriously believes Tom is short for Thomas. If he can't even get the name right the actual story can't be anything good.
I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
AlienWarlord
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I don't agree with the way the author handled it but it really is only small details, especially for an AU fanfic where things are supposed to be different. Voldemort lied about his blood status, what's there stopping him from lying about his name as Tom so that the anagram of 'I Am Lord Voldemort' still works? You said the fic obviously can't be good because of an eye color and slightly different name which is just plain stupid. I'm not calling this fic good, I haven't even read it, but honestly these are knit-picked details that really don't matter in the end.
what's the point of a fanfic in a specific universe if you don't give a shit about that universe. Just write your own universe. WTF. You are using it just to bait people. Come here people I write a Voldemort fanfic but it isn't actually Voldemort cause I don't give a shit about the actual facts I just use it as clickbait.
AlienWarlord:Its a fan-fiction. Dont take things to seriously and just enjoy it. Im not writing Voldemorts Biography. God, people just pick any minor thing to complain about, dont they.image
Lol, your writing hate comments aboIt a characters eye color and name. Maybe its time you get off this app and spend some time outside. Get some perspective as to why you care so much about something so minor.
Ashmodai:what's the point of a fanfic in a specific universe if you don't give a shit about that universe. Just write your own universe. WTF. You are using it just to bait people. Come here people I write a Voldemort fanfic but it isn't actually Voldemort cause I don't give a shit about the actual facts I just use it as clickbait.
lol just another trash author that can't accept criticism and calls it hate comment. Good that I had the foresight to put this novel in my trash collection.
AlienWarlord:Lol, your writing hate comments aboIt a characters eye color and name. Maybe its time you get off this app and spend some time outside. Get some perspective as to why you care so much about something so minor.image
Ashmodai:lol just another trash author that can't accept criticism and calls it hate comment. Good that I had the foresight to put this novel in my trash collection.
Ashmodai:what's the point of a fanfic in a specific universe if you don't give a shit about that universe. Just write your own universe. WTF. You are using it just to bait people. Come here people I write a Voldemort fanfic but it isn't actually Voldemort cause I don't give a shit about the actual facts I just use it as clickbait.
people lacking melanin in their irises due to albinism, the blood vessels are visible enough to create a pink or red appearance.
Ashmodai:Voldemorts Name is still Tom not Thomas. And people aren't born with red eyes...
MimicReads:people lacking melanin in their irises due to albinism, the blood vessels are visible enough to create a pink or red appearance.
MimicReads:people lacking melanin in their irises due to albinism, the blood vessels are visible enough to create a pink or red appearance.
Ashmodai:so you are telling me this Voldemort is pale and blond haired. Even greater bullshit.
you said he has red eyes because of albanism... so he also has white/blond hair and pale skin. So stop bullshiting around. And yes describing appearance and keeping the world background right is important for the quality of a fanfic. I don't read bad ones like these. So I gave for the laziness of the author an appropriate review. I don't get what you want.
MimicReads:I dont remember saying that🤔 Isnt a fanfic? Who cares How they look
Ashmodai:you said he has red eyes because of albanism... so he also has white/blond hair and pale skin. So stop bullshiting around. And yes describing appearance and keeping the world background right is important for the quality of a fanfic. I don't read bad ones like these. So I gave for the laziness of the author an appropriate review. I don't get what you want.
Whats got you in a grumpy mood? If you dont like the story you could always Wrote one yoursef. Im so Mad becuase they changed the character, Boo Hoo go cry somewhere else
Ashmodai:you said he has red eyes because of albanism... so he also has white/blond hair and pale skin. So stop bullshiting around. And yes describing appearance and keeping the world background right is important for the quality of a fanfic. I don't read bad ones like these. So I gave for the laziness of the author an appropriate review. I don't get what you want.
oh I am writing a story myself and am currently publishing under another account. It's not my problem that you apparently can't accept criticism that has not even do anything with you. You seem to be very bored.
MimicReads:Whats got you in a grumpy mood? If you dont like the story you could always Wrote one yoursef. Im so Mad becuase they changed the character, Boo Hoo go cry somewhere else
Ashmodai:oh I am writing a story myself and am currently publishing under another account. It's not my problem that you apparently can't accept criticism that has not even do anything with you. You seem to be very bored.
Ashmodai:oh I am writing a story myself and am currently publishing under another account. It's not my problem that you apparently can't accept criticism that has not even do anything with you. You seem to be very bored.
I did point out where the author made his mistakes... why are you blaming my review if the author doesn't give a shit about said mistakes. What is wrong with you?
OkayRose:Why would you write criticism if it isn'y constructive? Just making yourself look bad buddy