More people would find and read this novel if the author had a unique cover for the book and if he had a better synopsis. The current one brings little interest. I personally, when searching for a new novel, wouldn't have chosen this book if not for my desperation in finding a good system novel. To those with options- the synopsis and cover matter ( alongside the review ). As for the novel itself-I was never a good reviewer but I will try to interest you. The writing quality can't be compared to a published novel of course but it is still much better than your average webnovel. Little to no grammatical mistakes. (No filtering in your head- you would need to seriously concentrate on finding errors to find errors). The cheat of the mc ( the godly talent system ) is OP. But it isn't such that the story becomes boring because of the ease. It is written in such a way that the mc gets a pleasurable amount of power in a good amount of time. In terms of updating stability-the author is a machine. He manages to write 3-4 chapters of decent length everyday. The pacing of the story is quite good and the plot is somewhat unpredictable. Yes, the goal is to cultivate and become stronger but it is done in a nice way that pleases me- and hopefully will please you. The story develops well as the author introduces new factors into the story which add great enjoyment and suspense. The character design is pretty great. The main character and even the side characters (the more important ones) are properly fleshed out. Though it is not the best- the author can work on it- it is already very good. As for world background- it could use a lot of work. I don't have the best representation of the world right now. It is just barely passable. This doesn't take too much from the story at its current level but if it were better it would add a substantial amount. The story itself is very appealing and I hope that whoever comes across this post will decide to read the book and support the author. I am hooked and hope that more chapters come out so I can see where our great MC will go. Don't forget to vote powerstones everyday so that more people have the opportunity to check this book out. Also- for the author: You should do your best to pump out chapters past 100-200 or even 500 because most people won't read unless there is a certain amount of chapters. Once again, I chose this out of desperation (lol) and honestly I am greatly thankful I did. I hope that you will not turn a deaf ear to constructive criticism and any help the readers might offer you so that you can continue to improve this novel. And most importantly - don't drop this novel :) Thanks for writing it and making we wait in anticipation ahaha
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LIKEThere's actually so much I missed in this review. Unfortunately there is no edit feature. Most of the enemies are not brain dead young masters. At first they may seem to be but then they properly weigh the pros and cons and the smarter ones decide not to mess with the MC. (Just check out the novel, you won't be dissapointed).
