As the author, I believe that you should always think the best of yourself. This is why I sincerely feel that this book deserves a 5 You could say that I am an absolutely newbie in this, because I am, and I am writing solely for fun Honestly, I feel that writing a story is so much easier than writing a comment. How am I supposed to even reach 140 characters? What am I supposed to even do? Make a review of myself and shamelessly promote myself?

even though some people might find this story cliché, I don't. only the concepts the author has used has become cliché over time. they were fascinating when I started reading novels in 2012-13. I have to say, the author has done a great job in keeping everything interesting and I want mooaar!

More people would find and read this novel if the author had a unique cover for the book and if he had a better synopsis. The current one brings little interest. I personally, when searching for a new novel, wouldn't have chosen this book if not for my desperation in finding a good system novel. To those with options- the synopsis and cover matter ( alongside the review ). As for the novel itself-I was never a good reviewer but I will try to interest you. The writing quality can't be compared to a published novel of course but it is still much better than your average webnovel. Little to no grammatical mistakes. (No filtering in your head- you would need to seriously concentrate on finding errors to find errors). The cheat of the mc ( the godly talent system ) is OP. But it isn't such that the story becomes boring because of the ease. It is written in such a way that the mc gets a pleasurable amount of power in a good amount of time. In terms of updating stability-the author is a machine. He manages to write 3-4 chapters of decent length everyday. The pacing of the story is quite good and the plot is somewhat unpredictable. Yes, the goal is to cultivate and become stronger but it is done in a nice way that pleases me- and hopefully will please you. The story develops well as the author introduces new factors into the story which add great enjoyment and suspense. The character design is pretty great. The main character and even the side characters (the more important ones) are properly fleshed out. Though it is not the best- the author can work on it- it is already very good. As for world background- it could use a lot of work. I don't have the best representation of the world right now. It is just barely passable. This doesn't take too much from the story at its current level but if it were better it would add a substantial amount. The story itself is very appealing and I hope that whoever comes across this post will decide to read the book and support the author. I am hooked and hope that more chapters come out so I can see where our great MC will go. Don't forget to vote powerstones everyday so that more people have the opportunity to check this book out. Also- for the author: You should do your best to pump out chapters past 100-200 or even 500 because most people won't read unless there is a certain amount of chapters. Once again, I chose this out of desperation (lol) and honestly I am greatly thankful I did. I hope that you will not turn a deaf ear to constructive criticism and any help the readers might offer you so that you can continue to improve this novel. And most importantly - don't drop this novel :) Thanks for writing it and making we wait in anticipation ahaha

cliche? arrogant young masters✓ countless potential lovers√ walking-cheat-MC✓ OP system✓ although you can anticipate some scene, it's still better than others, you must try to read it! I love his OPness and humbleness(humblemyasslol) unlike other narrow-minded-MC who'll do anything just to punish people who offended him(so petty), he would just finished them off without any chitchat. I love the pace and quality so far, hoping this will continue 'till the end, thanks for writing this!

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Hy could it be that you have dropped this novel?????? This novel is truly great. Story is great. Progress is also great. So plz don't drop this novel.

Good story but have usual cliche,interesting reed, smooth reed no problem there , side characters don't have any significance to plot, romance is little too fast, mc interaction are not so good, in conclusion not masterpiece but good story

swords appearing out of nowhere ... (or money to buy them) handbags, clean clothes even though they are in the forest for days, completely cliché characters, they are not completely stupid (which takes a little out of the cliche, meee, in fact, not so much) ... I think you are spending your finite life writing this, honestly that and generic.

Ok story ruined by cliches, nothing really new.