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Get_Diabetes
Get_DiabetesAuthor4yr
2020-11-27 20:48

As the author, I believe that you should always think the best of yourself. This is why I sincerely feel that this book deserves a 5 You could say that I am an absolutely newbie in this, because I am, and I am writing solely for fun Honestly, I feel that writing a story is so much easier than writing a comment. How am I supposed to even reach 140 characters? What am I supposed to even do? Make a review of myself and shamelessly promote myself?

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Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

is this harem

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

Harem?

Alex_Guetta
Alex_GuettaLv15

No

ProfessorofCulture:Harem?
Alex_Guetta
Alex_GuettaLv15

No

Nikhil_Chand:is this harem
Alex_Guetta
Alex_GuettaLv15

Nice work author but you can still improve, thumb up 🔥🔥

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_PyrsmLv3

i hope this story let us enjoy the free chapters longer

Might_Cho
Might_ChoLv14

where thw Synopsys ?

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

are you the author?

Alex_Guetta:No
thirdgodlybrother
thirdgodlybrotherLv1

man, aren't you supposed to give us a synopsis? can't read a bool when you give me 2 generic tags and no explanation

Get_Diabetes
Get_DiabetesAuthor

Man, the Talent part of the name looks rather obvious But let me just make a simple one first

thirdgodlybrother:man, aren't you supposed to give us a synopsis? can't read a bool when you give me 2 generic tags and no explanation
thirdgodlybrother
thirdgodlybrotherLv1

Yeah, I can understand he has a system in a cultivation world and it's about talent. But that's about it, I don't even know his name, if he is more like a villain or hero, if he wants to save the world or just chill out at summer, or the important questions! Like, if he likes thighs, tits or ass! The basic information if he is cultured or not! Utterly necessary.

Get_Diabetes:Man, the Talent part of the name looks rather obvious But let me just make a simple one first
thirdgodlybrother
thirdgodlybrotherLv1

Well, in the end you did answer me so I will read even without a synopsis. Soon.

Get_Diabetes:Man, the Talent part of the name looks rather obvious But let me just make a simple one first
Get_Diabetes
Get_DiabetesAuthor

I see... The latter part seems really important But I left it all blank so that you can imagine it for yourself It's a strategic method to keep the readers intrigued and attracted ------------ Just kidding I'm too lazy

thirdgodlybrother:Yeah, I can understand he has a system in a cultivation world and it's about talent. But that's about it, I don't even know his name, if he is more like a villain or hero, if he wants to save the world or just chill out at summer, or the important questions! Like, if he likes thighs, tits or ass! The basic information if he is cultured or not! Utterly necessary.
maxgonz
maxgonzLv12

Btw author plz don't drop this!!! Pzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........... Your work is great!

Overlord_1000
Overlord_1000Lv4

author tell me it's not a harem please

moi_aimer_10270905
moi_aimer_10270905Lv14

Author update please 🙇🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇

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KingofWood
KingofWoodLv4

More people would find and read this novel if the author had a unique cover for the book and if he had a better synopsis. The current one brings little interest. I personally, when searching for a new novel, wouldn't have chosen this book if not for my desperation in finding a good system novel. To those with options- the synopsis and cover matter ( alongside the review ). As for the novel itself-I was never a good reviewer but I will try to interest you. The writing quality can't be compared to a published novel of course but it is still much better than your average webnovel. Little to no grammatical mistakes. (No filtering in your head- you would need to seriously concentrate on finding errors to find errors). The cheat of the mc ( the godly talent system ) is OP. But it isn't such that the story becomes boring because of the ease. It is written in such a way that the mc gets a pleasurable amount of power in a good amount of time. In terms of updating stability-the author is a machine. He manages to write 3-4 chapters of decent length everyday. The pacing of the story is quite good and the plot is somewhat unpredictable. Yes, the goal is to cultivate and become stronger but it is done in a nice way that pleases me- and hopefully will please you. The story develops well as the author introduces new factors into the story which add great enjoyment and suspense. The character design is pretty great. The main character and even the side characters (the more important ones) are properly fleshed out. Though it is not the best- the author can work on it- it is already very good. As for world background- it could use a lot of work. I don't have the best representation of the world right now. It is just barely passable. This doesn't take too much from the story at its current level but if it were better it would add a substantial amount. The story itself is very appealing and I hope that whoever comes across this post will decide to read the book and support the author. I am hooked and hope that more chapters come out so I can see where our great MC will go. Don't forget to vote powerstones everyday so that more people have the opportunity to check this book out. Also- for the author: You should do your best to pump out chapters past 100-200 or even 500 because most people won't read unless there is a certain amount of chapters. Once again, I chose this out of desperation (lol) and honestly I am greatly thankful I did. I hope that you will not turn a deaf ear to constructive criticism and any help the readers might offer you so that you can continue to improve this novel. And most importantly - don't drop this novel :) Thanks for writing it and making we wait in anticipation ahaha

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