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Majeh7
Majeh7Lv53yr
2021-06-20 21:01

Really good please don't drop πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

MHA:OMNITRIX

Boboiboyfan01
3.7
37 Chs

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Imperial_Fox
Imperial_FoxLv5

Completely butchered the concept. MC is overtly dramatic, edgy and emo. much like Sasuke, but even worse, he doesn't use his brain in right matters, if he used his mind correctly, he could have easily lived without much drama. Author just wanted to create too much drama and edginess, really, even the grammar, writing style are bad. no world background given, just involved Ben 10 characters out of nowhere. a completely wasted Ben 10 story

4yr

yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14

God you can't write a single sentence right. Are you using a translator or is this you cause my God is it bad, the character isn't that compelling either he's more annoying than anything. Thanks for ruining another omnitrix story for me, it seems that no one can actually make a decent one except a handful of people.

4yr
PieceofSh1tApp
PieceofSh1tAppLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Rysiarth_mundusDeo
Rysiarth_mundusDeoLv6

One of the most dramatic, edgy , and stupid MC i ever saw in the Fucking world stupid author................n.n ....n. ..n. . n. ........ ...n..

4yr
mysticalnaps
mysticalnapsLv5

This is horrible, straight up foul. The story is bad, there's no fixing it. the grammar kills me, there's nothing desirable about it. I love omnitrix stories and I was hoping for a new interest and all I got was disappointment. All I have to ask is why was this in trending for me?

3yr
GRAVITY
GRAVITYLv5

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3yr
Daoist538275
Daoist538275Lv1

GOOD. Great fan fiction, interesting gg, good character disclosure. Good luck and update the fanfic soon. how soon will the chapter be out?[img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
antonio_montenegro
antonio_montenegroLv3

very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien estΓ‘ bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien estΓ‘ bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien estΓ‘ bien (traductora)

3yr
Luzivar
LuzivarLv4

the fan-fic is really good. mha and omnitrix is a good combi. i hope you write more and dont drop just tell us when more chapter come ps: the devil like it

3yr
Sword_Pro
Sword_ProLv4

I will not write a lot of sentences. I'll just say that this is good fanfiction and i enjoy it a lot. Author, please continue, you're doing great.

3yr
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