Item: MHA:OMNITRIX
Rating: 1
Author: Imperial_Fox

Imperial_FoxLv54yr

2021-01-03 15:36

Completely butchered the concept. MC is overtly dramatic, edgy and emo. much like Sasuke, but even worse, he doesn't use his brain in right matters, if he used his mind correctly, he could have easily lived without much drama. Author just wanted to create too much drama and edginess, really, even the grammar, writing style are bad. no world background given, just involved Ben 10 characters out of nowhere. a completely wasted Ben 10 story

MHA:OMNITRIX

Boboiboyfan01

3.7

37 Chs

Liked by 54 people

Replies3

LuzivarLv4

he had to live with endeavor as his father

4yr

Omega_Lv12

He is the worst MHA chraracter, still a poorly constructed novel sadly.

Luzivar:he had to live with endeavor as his father

3yr

God_Of_LazinessLv3

ikr

3yr

Other Reviews

yokedjaguarLv14

God you can't write a single sentence right. Are you using a translator or is this you cause my God is it bad, the character isn't that compelling either he's more annoying than anything. Thanks for ruining another omnitrix story for me, it seems that no one can actually make a decent one except a handful of people.

4yr

PieceofSh1tAppLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr

Rysiarth_mundusDeoLv12

One of the most dramatic, edgy , and stupid MC i ever saw in the Fucking world stupid author................n.n ....n. ..n. . n. ........ ...n..

4yr

mysticalnapsLv5

This is horrible, straight up foul. The story is bad, there's no fixing it. the grammar kills me, there's nothing desirable about it. I love omnitrix stories and I was hoping for a new interest and all I got was disappointment. All I have to ask is why was this in trending for me?

4yr

GRAVITYLv5

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3yr

Daoist538275Lv1

GOOD. Great fan fiction, interesting gg, good character disclosure. Good luck and update the fanfic soon. how soon will the chapter be out?[img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr

antonio_montenegroLv3

very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora)

3yr

LuzivarLv4

the fan-fic is really good. mha and omnitrix is a good combi. i hope you write more and dont drop just tell us when more chapter come ps: the devil like it

4yr

Sword_ProLv4

I will not write a lot of sentences. I'll just say that this is good fanfiction and i enjoy it a lot. Author, please continue, you're doing great.

4yr

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