Majeh7

keep up the great work it would be cool if he got shirou emiya power.............................................................................

keep up the great work...........................................................................................................................

Great novel keep up the great work................................................................................................................

I think it is a good novel but you make him to soft ..............................................................................................

Great novel keep up the great work...............................................................................................................

I am sorry I try to be positive but your making the MC a push over. if you didn't do that this story will be better if you fix it I am sure it will get more better reviews.

great work ......................................................................................................................................

great work.........................................................................................................................................

great work.......................................................................................................................................

Great work.........................................................................................................................................