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yokedjaguar
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2021-01-03 09:02

God you can't write a single sentence right. Are you using a translator or is this you cause my God is it bad, the character isn't that compelling either he's more annoying than anything. Thanks for ruining another omnitrix story for me, it seems that no one can actually make a decent one except a handful of people.

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Listless_Grim
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ay would you mind hitting me up with the titles for the good ones?

Bobby_pierce
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omnitrix in marvel is one of the best omnitrix fan fics so far just doesn't upload to often

Listless_Grim:ay would you mind hitting me up with the titles for the good ones?
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