Alberto_Kalach

Why

It’s so fast it’s boring

The path of cultivation but this writing is so fast that it’s not considered a fan fic it’s considered a monologue

Man trust in your writing and if you need it get help from ChatGPT, your a very good writer but you need to be more discriptive we are not here for you to tell us what he did, we are reading this for you to tell us what he is doing, instead of saying he did that and he did this, actually write the plot and tell us what he is doing, that’s what makes the story interesting

Best fábrica I have read in a while, masterfully writen and beitifully thought out I need books of philosophy recommendations from you author

plus when he is bleeding out he becomes faster

Rapist Mc He has no boundary’s with people and he don’t give a shit if he SA someone

Much betterrrrr

Facts