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vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor4yr
2021-01-10 16:51

Hello everyone, You can see the author tag beside my name. Yes, I am the author of this book. I am here to give some detailed review of the story. - The book will have some grammatical mistakes, so if you can bear those little ones, I can guarantee that you will enjoy the story. - No Harem Since it is a cultivation story, many readers think, it might be a harem; however, I don't plan to add Harem to it. - Starting will a slow; however, it will be smooth after initial world building and characters introduction. - MC will be ignorant about many things in the beginning but he will learn things with time - Romance Some readers asked me whether it has romance or not. Yes, there will be romance; however, it will be short. - The story will be very long. So, please stick with me till the end. Hmm...that's it. I hope it is helpful and if you have any doubts, you can ask here. Thanks for reading my book.

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M_Vanesto
M_VanestoLv1

I'm really happy there's no harem. Harems seems to spoil most cultivation novels as the MC usually is focused on becoming stronger and don't have much time for all the women. Also, the women are usually weak and the MC has to always protect them which is not always feasible since he has to leave them most times to become stronger.

Ranhm
RanhmLv2

Yes Romance :D but short xd

ExquireMomo08
ExquireMomo08Lv5

more like. the story will be long but the romance is short?? guess that means a bad end for them or the romance will appear near the end..

Diamond_128
Diamond_128Lv11

weak to op

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Alex_Guetta
Alex_GuettaLv14

Why did you make the mc dumb as a brick?

rockinroll39
rockinroll39Lv5

honestly the only novel ive seen do decently with the harem tag was martial world, partly because the harem ended at 4, instead of the 8-14 far to many stories have

M_Vanesto:I'm really happy there's no harem. Harems seems to spoil most cultivation novels as the MC usually is focused on becoming stronger and don't have much time for all the women. Also, the women are usually weak and the MC has to always protect them which is not always feasible since he has to leave them most times to become stronger.
J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13

I’m disappointed that the romance will be short. I think cultivation stories are perfect for romance, as a powerful and long-lived MC is going to be popular with the opposite *** and a perfect candidate for finding someone to spend all those years with. Unless someone writes a story about a weak sissy MC who will die young, which sounds like a terrible story, lol. A story where the love interest gets strong too and stays with the MC would be awesome. Monarch of Time is the only novel I’ve read recently where the love interest stays with the MC and gets stronger alongside the MC rather than gets left behind and only pops up once every 500 chapters. The author of Monarch of Time has done great developing the characters too, so if he does have the MC with more than one wife it will make sense and not be forced. I wish more authors handled characters and romance like that - keeping the MC and love interests together, letting them get stronger together, and making the relationships make sense in the story and not be forced.

CodezL
CodezLLv4

What does a brief romance mean? could you explain it to me? is the mc going to die a virgin or is he going to lose his virginity in chapter 300?

CodezL
CodezLLv4

ok, then it is not for me, cultivation novels do not usually like me for this, or they lose their virginity at 2000 years in chapter 600 or they do it from the first chapter and they hunt women as if they were pokemon, even raping them, it is difficult find a novel with a middle ground.

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vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

romance will be in the middle of the story..

ExquireMomo08:more like. the story will be long but the romance is short?? guess that means a bad end for them or the romance will appear near the end..
vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

I didn't understand what you are saying. .. 🤷🏻‍♂️

CodezL:ok, then it is not for me, cultivation novels do not usually like me for this, or they lose their virginity at 2000 years in chapter 600 or they do it from the first chapter and they hunt women as if they were pokemon, even raping them, it is difficult find a novel with a middle ground.
CodezL
CodezLLv4

What I hate when what you are doing happens, that you have to wait 600 chapters for the MC to get married or at least lose his virginity, these MCs are not realistic, they are human beings with desires and weaknesses, but many authors forget of that and make them austists who only focus on cultivation.

vinayraj:I didn't understand what you are saying. .. 🤷🏻‍♂️
CodezL
CodezLLv4

Why does he have to forget everything just to do something else? is it retarded? If it's retarded then you're right it's not my cup of tea

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J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13

A short romance in a long story? That’s unfortunate, even if you didn’t add a harem a story where the MC and his wife/dao companion journeyed with him and eventually became Immortals would have been great to read. Oh well, even though it’s not for me best of luck with your story.

vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

actually, the book is going to very long, so compared to it, the romance fells short. .i can say it will have a minimum of 30 percent romance. ..now it's your wish to read it or not. 🙂

J_S_2998:A short romance in a long story? That’s unfortunate, even if you didn’t add a harem a story where the MC and his wife/dao companion journeyed with him and eventually became Immortals would have been great to read. Oh well, even though it’s not for me best of luck with your story.
vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

the book is going to be very long. .. so compared to it, the romance is short. I can approximately say that it will have 30 percent of romance. .. now it's your wish whether to read or not

J_S_2998:A short romance in a long story? That’s unfortunate, even if you didn’t add a harem a story where the MC and his wife/dao companion journeyed with him and eventually became Immortals would have been great to read. Oh well, even though it’s not for me best of luck with your story.
vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

my previous comment was a mistake. I thought it was for my other book. for this book, there will be 30 percent romance which willstart after 200 chapters. ..

CodezL:What does a brief romance mean? could you explain it to me? is the mc going to die a virgin or is he going to lose his virginity in chapter 300?
God_Of_Lazinesss
God_Of_LazinesssLv2

What up first hundred chapters being world building in many novel that I know. Why not do world building together with everything?just curious, can tell??

AppleyGod
AppleyGodLv10

what does "romance will be short" mean?

brokkkenking
brokkkenkingLv11

hey bro ru from India....?if yes let's catch up bro ...I too am a author

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