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Sesshomaru_Lv24yr
2020-12-23 04:40

IM going to be honest here since most of these reviews seem fake, while the story itself is good, the character is as smarts a brick. He ask the system everything and even then he doesn't follow the good suggestions that the system gives him and is completely oblivious to anything and cant seem to think for just a minute to find any answers. Like I said the story is good but for me the MC is the attention grabber if they are stupid then most of the time I will dislike the novel in general

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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

I don't understand why Author's make their own mc mentally retarded, is it even fun to write about an idiot?

Cry_Maker
Cry_MakerLv3

because they can t make it smarter?

Kokushibou:I don't understand why Author's make their own mc mentally retarded, is it even fun to write about an idiot?
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

I don't think that's the problem, but is probably a part of. Tbh, i think they need drama and misunderstanding's. And just moment's to give the mc bs cheat's.

Cry_Maker:because they can t make it smarter?
Cry_Maker
Cry_MakerLv3

but the mc being retarded doesn t change anything, actually in my opinion it just makes it so that people won t read it at all

Kokushibou:I don't think that's the problem, but is probably a part of. Tbh, i think they need drama and misunderstanding's. And just moment's to give the mc bs cheat's.
Lahar_Archmage
Lahar_ArchmageLv10

Does MC improve or he is "brick" whole story? I have it on my next to read list and i really hate when author makes stupid MC for no reason. Like you said it makes people hate whole novel even if it has good writing :/

MystiGlacier06
MystiGlacier06Lv11

characters cannot be smarter than their authors

Kokushibou:I don't understand why Author's make their own mc mentally retarded, is it even fun to write about an idiot?
Lahar_Archmage
Lahar_ArchmageLv10

+1, you just totally destroyed author :D There is some truth about that because his main novel has massive plot holes problems everywhere later in story.

MystiGlacier06:characters cannot be smarter than their authors
jats2004
jats2004Lv15

its quite easy to tell inflated ratings quick trick is 1mil views per 100 ratings, this would filter out authors that love to delete all negative comments

jats2004
jats2004Lv15

also, check the levels of reviewee, if most of the reviewees level is low, they mostly bots

BlueCold
BlueColdLv1

not true, you can make a smarter mc than the author. planning and outlining these things just takes more time and brain power.

MystiGlacier06:characters cannot be smarter than their authors
a_commoner
a_commonerLv5

They actually can, because the author situation is different from the characters', the character is limited by time, fear, unknown... so if he made the right decision he's way smarter than the author.

MystiGlacier06:characters cannot be smarter than their authors
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