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The protagonist is very pathetic; maybe they will improve, maybe not. But this is as far as I go. Good luck with this.

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"I know I wouldn’t last even three chapters if it became something OP, but I’d like it to transform into Doomsday and adapt. It could be an overpowered and permanent transformation."

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I like the powers within the context of the story, but the MC seems very dumb. He could do many things easily, but it feels like his neurons don’t connect enough to think about it. I could understand if it were impossible given his situation, but he just doesn’t do it because he lacks the ability to think of it—or at least that’s the impression it gives me.

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Just put them together... https://rolyz.com /series/american-comics-time-consuming-start-crazy-looting-entries/

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