I feel that the main characters could have done more for the jobs system. If they used three types of daos one for the jobs themselves helping the system to generate different jobs to bring out more of the users potential, one for skill trees linked to each type of job to help tap into more of the potential of the jobs, and then a dao for job medals which can be created in two ways. One when one completes a job skill tree a job medal is created and two by using different materials to create unique job medals that could bring various kinds of effects.
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LIKEAnother idea to creating a Dao for skill trees is that it can also help with generating skill trees for bloodlines, divine soul fragments, or even Dao fragments. Like some skills that could be generated for like the God of Mana job could be mana runes, a better understanding of what mana is, a skill to create mana pools in the world, a skill to create mana cores in oneself or others, or even a skill to give a unique type of eyes that are able to see mana flow in the environment. Mana Nexus job could generate a skill tree with skills like being able to sense points in the fabric of reality where mana could be overlapping creating a type of mana nexus, a skill to better control energy, or even a skill to refine mana veins into a crystal-like in the body to improve energy flow. Mana Source job could generate a skill tree to could help with further tapping into those mana nexus', another skill would be to improve mana durability in constructs or even a skill to help to refine a mana source into a higher quality of energy. I feel that Ervas could become a god of magic if he could tap into more of what magic is, as well as improve his understanding of the different types of magic he uses, and help him to learn other types of magic theories one of these methods is skill trees and job medals. Job medals bring unique types of spells when developed and skill trees help to dive more into the mysteries of one's abilities. When one max out a skill tree one gains a job medal with unique skills. Skill trees teach, as job medals reward.
Another thought is that maybe Ervas could take the jobs Mana Nexus, Mana Source, God of Mana, and Elder Dragon combine them to create a job medal called Great Dragon God of Mana and Energy. Veronica could combine all the jobs related to machines to create a job medal called Divine Goddess of Metal and Machines or a job medal that will lead to her creating many humanoid machine life forms like Exe from Destiny.
For a bit of lore for the job medal Great Dragon God of Mana and Energy, it is said that these dragons are as big if not bigger than the Titans. That these dragons mainly sleep but as they sleep they take in the impure mana and energy, refine it in their body like plants, and exhale clean enriched pure mana and energy back into the realm. It is even said that due to their great size they are sometime mistaken as planets, galaxies, or even a universe itself. Some even believe that the dragon universe was born from within the remains of one and to this day the spirit of this dragon still watches over this universe.
Another kind of job medal could allow Ervas to gain a bloodline to a Nebula Nexus Wolf. Which are said to be a type of wolf when fully grown are equal in power to 100 Overseers. They travel through spacetime and reality going from one universe to another creating a new nexus from either mana to space element or even a nexus linked to the essence of runes. These wolves for whatever reason does this is the reason the Overseers hunt them, another is that they can't control them. Some say these wolves have been around since the beginning of time.
Now with Veronica, she could develop in a few ways, one is to further develop her understanding of machines and tech, another is by using her memory library, her divine senses, and her wisdom skills alongside her material heal skill she could study the makeup of the different materials as well as study how something is built like deconstruction. A type of job medal that could be made for here could be towards improving her foundation in machine and tech. Another kind of job medal that could be made is for one to help enhance her skills at using different kinds of weapons like a job medal called Arcane of the Divine Weapons Master. There could be a skill tree that could tap into more potential of her abilities towards how she can shape weapons from her body or help the durabilities of said weapons and armors.
You should write a novel or two, you have an insanely amazing imagination and I would so follow what you write
