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2023-02-04 12:10

I like the book and all but there's a slight mistake in the beginning....how are the rank of monsters higher as he goes up to leave the dungeon when they should be lowering in rank instead....>.>

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The obligatory five-star review of the author itself! Because this is my second novel, I can confidently say that my writing style has evolved a lot since my first novel (which is still going on if you want to check it out). However, I cannot escape from the small grammar mistakes here and there, so I will apologize in advance. This novel is about a very common and gloomy woman that suddenly died in a terrible car accident alongside her coworkers and was sent to a white space where a strange and lazy Transmigration God granted them a System designed to save humanity. Their task? Beta test it! Veronica's reincarnates as the daughter of the Demon King of the World of Kritias, named Anastacia. Her first life is filled with hardships and loneliness, but through her perseverance, she reached many things despite being talentless while having a bad cheat skill. However, even after growing so strong, she quickly discovers that her coworkers, the heroes, are in a completely different league than herself. In resume, she tries her hardest but dies horribly. To make things worse, the God that was backing the Heroes is insane and decides that piercing Veronica's soul with his Divine Power was a fitting end for her, diving her soul in two. Due to the will of two mysterious entities, however, both of her split souls reincarnate in... an incredibly similar world... but set in the past? One of her split souls becomes a Half-Demon Boy, son of a Demoness and a Farmer, while the other split soul reincarnates as a Living Armor inside a dangerous dungeon filled with deadly monsters that want to eat her despite being made entirely out of metal! Now watch as both protagonists go through their own hardships in their different lives, all of it to one day finally met with each other and help the people that they have sworn to protect in their previous life reach the prosperity they promised to them! This time, both of them will not fail, even if they have to one day confront that insane God once again. Monsters, Dungeon, Loot, Skills, Spells, Spirits, Demons, Elves, Beastmen, Level Ups, Job Changing, this novel has all of this juicy stuff! So please, give it a look!

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I am writing this review after finishing the book but i will try to keep spoilers to the minimum. This is a book with two protagonists and its not like some other stories that claim to have more than one protagonist but still have a sort of main one in here both Veronica and Ervas are as relevant to the story as each other. throughout this story you will see many parallels between Veronica and Ervas despite being literally the same person they could be said to be polar opposites. veronica is cheerful ruthless a bit bloodthirsty has a bombastic personality . meanwhile Ervas is gloomy shy calm and collection and overall feels almost emotionless. despite their differences they get along quite well and complement each other later on you will even find traits from each of them in the other one as they help each other become more complete while keeping their own unique identity. overall expect a story where you will find both cruelty to their enemies and benevolence to their allies as well as both confidence in themselves and insecurity of being accepted expect things and their opposites yin and yang but merged together rather than being separated. I believe i struggled a bit with delivering the meaning i wanted to convey but i hope you try this book and as their story ends anyone familiar with pancake's novels will know that this is not the end but rather a whole new beginning where they start to interact more closely with the protagonists from the other novels of the shared universe and once again i am not saying goodbye but till we meet again.

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