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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor4yr
2020-11-11 11:07

The obligatory five-star review of the author itself! Because this is my second novel, I can confidently say that my writing style has evolved a lot since my first novel (which is still going on if you want to check it out). However, I cannot escape from the small grammar mistakes here and there, so I will apologize in advance. This novel is about a very common and gloomy woman that suddenly died in a terrible car accident alongside her coworkers and was sent to a white space where a strange and lazy Transmigration God granted them a System designed to save humanity. Their task? Beta test it! Veronica's reincarnates as the daughter of the Demon King of the World of Kritias, named Anastacia. Her first life is filled with hardships and loneliness, but through her perseverance, she reached many things despite being talentless while having a bad cheat skill. However, even after growing so strong, she quickly discovers that her coworkers, the heroes, are in a completely different league than herself. In resume, she tries her hardest but dies horribly. To make things worse, the God that was backing the Heroes is insane and decides that piercing Veronica's soul with his Divine Power was a fitting end for her, diving her soul in two. Due to the will of two mysterious entities, however, both of her split souls reincarnate in... an incredibly similar world... but set in the past? One of her split souls becomes a Half-Demon Boy, son of a Demoness and a Farmer, while the other split soul reincarnates as a Living Armor inside a dangerous dungeon filled with deadly monsters that want to eat her despite being made entirely out of metal! Now watch as both protagonists go through their own hardships in their different lives, all of it to one day finally met with each other and help the people that they have sworn to protect in their previous life reach the prosperity they promised to them! This time, both of them will not fail, even if they have to one day confront that insane God once again. Monsters, Dungeon, Loot, Skills, Spells, Spirits, Demons, Elves, Beastmen, Level Ups, Job Changing, this novel has all of this juicy stuff! So please, give it a look!

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KidoEiryuu
KidoEiryuuLv2

Nice

Fantasie
FantasieLv13

They’re both the same person?

PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

They were once the same person but are now separate individuals that share a common past life. Both of them develop differently but are also connected

Fantasie:They’re both the same person?
13th_Night
13th_NightLv13

Female lead

PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

Male lead because this has no romance

13th_Night:Female lead
13th_Night
13th_NightLv13

she is clearly female, but okay.

PancakesWitch:Male lead because this has no romance
PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

It clearly doesn't matter at this point, especially in how WN separated female lead novels from male leads, making female leads exclusively romance, and thus showing themselves to a romance-oriented reader base that would never read my action-driven fantasy novel, hence, the male lead, so people that would be interested in the tags that my novel has will have this novel recommended. My first novel, Epic of Caterpillar, is the same.

13th_Night:she is clearly female, but okay.
CyberZero
CyberZeroLv14

do you need to read the frist novel to understand things, from what I have seen from side notes

Mahou_Ezekiel
Mahou_EzekielLv2

This will be the first novel I give a 5 before reading it because of your other book sir. Consider yourself lucky😄😄

TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

Not even the Lewd joke about being inside of herself later on? WHAT IS THIS! I summon the court of Webnovelists to judge you having commited treason by not taking such a obvious and perfect opportunity for the sake of novel meme/joke culture!

PancakesWitch:Male lead because this has no romance
DDLC
DDLCLv2

PonjuPonju
PonjuPonjuLv4

😋👍!!!

Gemiae
GemiaeLv14

Interesting. I’ll be checking this out soon. I’m curious to see how much your character devolpment/relationships have improved since Caterpillar. I look forward to it :D

PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

That would be awesome, thanks for considering it, i believe it still has varuous flaws

Gemiae:Interesting. I’ll be checking this out soon. I’m curious to see how much your character devolpment/relationships have improved since Caterpillar. I look forward to it :D
Demelios
DemeliosLv14

You should shorten the summary. We don't need to know about the kingdom thing its feel like a spoiler. But seriously It's Original!

Verhygo
VerhygoLv12

Wished that I would have known that earlier. Thanks.

PancakesWitch:It clearly doesn't matter at this point, especially in how WN separated female lead novels from male leads, making female leads exclusively romance, and thus showing themselves to a romance-oriented reader base that would never read my action-driven fantasy novel, hence, the male lead, so people that would be interested in the tags that my novel has will have this novel recommended. My first novel, Epic of Caterpillar, is the same.
Blacklotus
BlacklotusLv12

I've read both of your novels. Although I can say that the writing style has improved, I would argue that its less interesting/more boring compared to the previous one.

PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

uuh thanks for insulting my work?

Blacklotus:I've read both of your novels. Although I can say that the writing style has improved, I would argue that its less interesting/more boring compared to the previous one.
ProfessionalWeeb
ProfessionalWeebLv11

nice!!!😂😂😂

PancakesWitch:uuh thanks for insulting my work?
Blacklotus
BlacklotusLv12

nah its not an insult, i just think the previous work was more original than this one. The evolutions seemed cool and stuff. This work is not bad, there's just not the same feeling of excitement.

PancakesWitch:uuh thanks for insulting my work?
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0Acchan_Sama0
0Acchan_Sama0Lv14
isekai_seeker
isekai_seekerLv5

I am writing this review after finishing the book but i will try to keep spoilers to the minimum. This is a book with two protagonists and its not like some other stories that claim to have more than one protagonist but still have a sort of main one in here both Veronica and Ervas are as relevant to the story as each other. throughout this story you will see many parallels between Veronica and Ervas despite being literally the same person they could be said to be polar opposites. veronica is cheerful ruthless a bit bloodthirsty has a bombastic personality . meanwhile Ervas is gloomy shy calm and collection and overall feels almost emotionless. despite their differences they get along quite well and complement each other later on you will even find traits from each of them in the other one as they help each other become more complete while keeping their own unique identity. overall expect a story where you will find both cruelty to their enemies and benevolence to their allies as well as both confidence in themselves and insecurity of being accepted expect things and their opposites yin and yang but merged together rather than being separated. I believe i struggled a bit with delivering the meaning i wanted to convey but i hope you try this book and as their story ends anyone familiar with pancake's novels will know that this is not the end but rather a whole new beginning where they start to interact more closely with the protagonists from the other novels of the shared universe and once again i am not saying goodbye but till we meet again.

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