The story is amazingly well written good grammar, pacing, formatting and hugr chapter sizes. That said.... The plot is fairly predictable. There are a few Nekomata and Nekoshou mc fanfics on ff and Archive, and this pretty much follows the most popular formats... It's just written way way better. Still... You will feel the moment something is mentioned, that you know whats going to happen by assuming the most cliche thing... And It usually does. This is also why i didn't give a full score, because the story essentially uses simular stories from before as its canon lore. Making it sort of like fanfic that is better than the original fanfic of a story. Thats perfectly okay. Hell its definitely written better than the simular ones, it just prevents me from giving full marks. Because the plot is too predictable. These are the things the author can still work on tough: - Plot originality / twists / predictability - Authors Notes to be seperated from the text with a visible divider or AN: A very meager list of things that can be improved on, that is how well this fic is written. I definitely recommend this fanfic as a quality read.
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