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Nyarlathotep00
Nyarlathotep00Author4yr
2020-11-14 06:00

*cough**cough* A little self praise here in my rating. Don't mind me. Author here. This is a slow paced story. The relationships will not develop at once. Since he will not start any as a child, which so far in the story he is. I know that I am asking a lot but I would like that you gave the story a try, at least until the first volume is finished. Because the first chapters lack editing, they might be hard to understand. Sorry about that. I will try to fix it when I got time. Hmmm, it is a harem so expect multiple love interest. The fight scenes are something I am not familiar with so they might be lacking, but I hope to improve in the future. I accept critics. But I wish that they actually explain what the problem is. That is how you can actually help others to improve. Good day to you all. Ps: Here is how imagine the MC's cat form.

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Spirits_everywhere
Spirits_everywhereLv4

The first volume was boring until the end...I gave reading on it and started at the second volume, which is one chapter...but yeah. The second volume is nicer than the first

Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

first volume made me drop it chapter 3 was bad enough but then it was just too slow even into volume 2. instead of hyping up a mother son relation ship just for her to run off under the excuse he was threatened.... yea it just destroyed the story

Spading
SpadingLv2

Hello Author-san is there any image of how the MC looks like...

Spirits_everywhere
Spirits_everywhereLv4

Just a black cat? Essentially, a male Kuroka

Spading:Hello Author-san is there any image of how the MC looks like...
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Pervert_In_Net
Pervert_In_NetLv6

well, let's go. the story is very good, the development is good, the interaction between the characters is good, the personality is good, everything is great in this story. however there are still some things that I personally did not like. FIRST: it was the speed of history. I read until chapter 8, the epilogue of vol.1, and I found the development very slow, the chapters are long, I don't know exactly how much, but about 5000 words or more, and with so many words these 8 chapters could cover almost 50 chapters from other stories, and despite that Mc is only 5 or 6 years old, so far the story is more like a slice of life than anything else. SECOND: it was that the author decided to make one of the taboos of stories of reincarnation that was Mc talking about his reincarnation with his mother. from that point on I felt that the interaction between Mc and his mother was completely forced, not because the author wrote this interaction in a bad way, but because, with you aware that your mother knows that despite his infantile body he he is already an *****, the way they act simply "does not make sense", so the situation does not seem to fit, so for me the interaction between the MC and his mother after this point were situations that I did not like to read, I preferred Mc's interaction with any other character than reading him and his mother talking. THIRD: it's a very personal thing so it doesn't serve as a criticism, which is the fact that the MC's personality seems to be that of a "hero" if you know what I mean. personally I prefer more selfish characters, who act for themselves or for those he likes, but so far it doesn’t seem to be the case for this character, at least I understand his personality (SPOLER: and I’m not just talking about how he acted to save Rias and Sona). Overall the story is great and very well done, unlike other authors who write without thinking too much to kill time, the author seems to be taking it seriously, but personally I think the author should increase the pace of the story (I'm not talking about chapter updates, but the speed at which the story goes).

amaturewriter
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