Detail review below I am sorry, but this is not the greatest DxD like other proclaim, in fact, this is only above average for this site and average if we count fanfic.net, QQ, and spacebattle. The mc being nekomata/nekoshou is already exist somewhere in fanfic, and iirc, create by fairy tail dragon slayer. So why this rating? First off, author have done the worst taboo he can do in reincarantion fic, in fact, he does it in world breaking record at chapter 3. He expose his secret to his mother. So why this is a taboo? Because this break the immersion of a reader, breaking metaknowledge, and make author look like lazy. Moreover, by breaking the taboo, it gonna make ur mother relationship seem fake in the future no matter how good u write it. There many way to expose the secret without breaking the story, but definitely not as early as chapter 3. Other may find it nothing big, that just mean u have not read good fanfic, with good story development. In my experience of reading fanfic, those who expose it suffer in story development for the backlash. Its a lose lose situation for rookie writer. Those who expose it early need a strong writing skill to not degrade the story which new writer not has the level of skill, and those that act like nothing happen after exposing it suffer from story development and annoy the reader because he ignore the consequences of exposing secret. (The cause and effect)

It's honestly one of the better DxD fanfics on this site. It has great grammer, lengthy chapters, and characters that actually act as if they are real people. Not to mention it also has pretty good fight scenes. What more could you want?

well, let's go. the story is very good, the development is good, the interaction between the characters is good, the personality is good, everything is great in this story. however there are still some things that I personally did not like. FIRST: it was the speed of history. I read until chapter 8, the epilogue of vol.1, and I found the development very slow, the chapters are long, I don't know exactly how much, but about 5000 words or more, and with so many words these 8 chapters could cover almost 50 chapters from other stories, and despite that Mc is only 5 or 6 years old, so far the story is more like a slice of life than anything else. SECOND: it was that the author decided to make one of the taboos of stories of reincarnation that was Mc talking about his reincarnation with his mother. from that point on I felt that the interaction between Mc and his mother was completely forced, not because the author wrote this interaction in a bad way, but because, with you aware that your mother knows that despite his infantile body he he is already an *****, the way they act simply "does not make sense", so the situation does not seem to fit, so for me the interaction between the MC and his mother after this point were situations that I did not like to read, I preferred Mc's interaction with any other character than reading him and his mother talking. THIRD: it's a very personal thing so it doesn't serve as a criticism, which is the fact that the MC's personality seems to be that of a "hero" if you know what I mean. personally I prefer more selfish characters, who act for themselves or for those he likes, but so far it doesn’t seem to be the case for this character, at least I understand his personality (SPOLER: and I’m not just talking about how he acted to save Rias and Sona). Overall the story is great and very well done, unlike other authors who write without thinking too much to kill time, the author seems to be taking it seriously, but personally I think the author should increase the pace of the story (I'm not talking about chapter updates, but the speed at which the story goes).

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character design is good and world background is so so. but the story is baad. This has so much tragedy that i dont get why the comedy tag is attached here. The story is quite readable. But i started skipping the moment he got kidnapped. i mean after he got reincarnated * he got into a life and death situation in underworld. * His mom left to do some things without thinking to much about her son. * While looking for his mom, he got mixed up with bellial incident. * next moment he got kidnapped. This looks like xianxia to me .

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great job on the novel. looking forward to more chapters. Personally i think the mc is too nice and tries to make people happy sometimes even though it is somone else's fault. so will he grow a spine. will he kill later in the novel or will he not kill thx.

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the only saving grace for this novel is its somewhat ok grammar and writing quality , other than that every other aspect is either terribly bad or agonizingly boring and cliche this novel is closer to a Chinese xianxia than a dxd fanfic where you have the mc hoing on pointless side quests in order to gain power only to come out weaker than he was , not to mention the mc is a 6 y/o child for most of it . overall it was a huge waste of time .