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Harem_fanLv54yr
2020-12-12 01:59

THIS IS A MUST READ!!! Simply one of the better DxD fan-fictions I have had the pleasure of stumbling upon. Warning the first two chapters are a bit slow to build up, but the author takes time to develop the MC personality. This story feels like it could have been written by the canon author and feels like it stays true to the content...The good news is the MC is NOT a racist peace of human supremacy and treats all races equally. This is not a lets bash Rias for no good reason fic ether. The author developed a wonderful back story for the MC and has kept his power level at a manageable pace. The chapters are big and informative...Yes this will be a harem just like the canon. Anyway I could go on and on but just put it in your library and have fun!

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Nyarlathotep00
Nyarlathotep00Author

Thanks for the positive review... and thanks for reading.

Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

I have gotten to the current chapter 19, and the story is still going strong. I love the character and relation development. I still recommend this primarily for those readers that enjoyed canon!

iori143
iori143Lv4

is kuroka and shirone still gonna be reincarnated as devil?

iori143
iori143Lv4

thanks hahaha I hope author removes the evil piece. that's why I like the bleach-dxd-danmachi fanfic cause kisuke removes piece from kuroka and shirone

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Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

DxD is about devils and I hate when readers want to got to Pokemon world and free them all yelling "SLAVERY BAD!" Go and ruin another fan fiction!

iori143:thanks hahaha I hope author removes the evil piece. that's why I like the bleach-dxd-danmachi fanfic cause kisuke removes piece from kuroka and shirone
kevin_saputra
kevin_saputraLv3

yes that's the function of fanfic man, here we can explore deeper into factions other than the devil because DxD is only about good devils, strong devils, evil devils, and everything about devils because MC himself is a devil. yes they hate evil-pieces because MC / OC cannot move freely in the story and will definitely be tied to the canon / story characters because OC must be RIas or Sona's peerage.

Harem_fan:DxD is about devils and I hate when readers want to got to Pokemon world and free them all yelling "SLAVERY BAD!" Go and ruin another fan fiction!
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iori143
iori143Lv4

lol. that's why its fanfic. you can just focus on everything else. like this one its focus is on youkais so why make the heroine a devil of she is a stray devil that everyone kills hahaha stray devils on dxd is like the monsters in other fantasy worlds

Harem_fan:DxD is about devils and I hate when readers want to got to Pokemon world and free them all yelling "SLAVERY BAD!" Go and ruin another fan fiction!
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Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

She IS NOT a stray devil.....duh.

iori143:lol. that's why its fanfic. you can just focus on everything else. like this one its focus is on youkais so why make the heroine a devil of she is a stray devil that everyone kills hahaha stray devils on dxd is like the monsters in other fantasy worlds
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

iori143 If you would actually read the story instead of harassing me you would know your comments are baseless and off the mark...go make your own review instead of bothering me with stupid things..I know it is hard to believe but I am NOT the author of this great fan-fiction!

Reaper_X_7998
Reaper_X_7998Lv15

what I think there was a mistake they said she would be a stray BC it foceses on yokai not devils (dont ask me the logic but it kinda makes sense in a way why be part of one faction but also interfere with another)

Harem_fan:She IS NOT a stray devil.....duh.
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Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

She was only a stray/criminal in canon for killing her king..she DID not commit a crime this go around so she is NOT a criminal.

Reaper_X_7998:what I think there was a mistake they said she would be a stray BC it foceses on yokai not devils (dont ask me the logic but it kinda makes sense in a way why be part of one faction but also interfere with another)
Nyarlathotep00
Nyarlathotep00Author

You should just mention the name... That is a good fan fiction, but I won't remove that evil piece... there are plans for that.

iori143:thanks hahaha I hope author removes the evil piece. that's why I like the bleach-dxd-danmachi fanfic cause kisuke removes piece from kuroka and shirone
Thesoultaker88
Thesoultaker88Lv5

author i have some questions before reading and those are 1) will mc love his harem(if this ff has harem) 2) will he take care for his harem 3) will there be drama (like one girl does not like harem and breaks up with mc or they start a cold war and so on or mc can't take her so he tells her to forget him and find someone else)

Nyarlathotep00:Thanks for the positive review... and thanks for reading.
Nyarlathotep00
Nyarlathotep00Author

1) Yes 2)Yes 3)It is a spoiler so don't read if don't want to know too much... a relationship won't be like 'Hey, Miss. I want a harem. Join!' 'Sure'. No, I want to make different approaches for the girls. Some might not mind the idea, but others will dislike it as they want the MC for themselves. But not at the level you described.

Thesoultaker88:author i have some questions before reading and those are 1) will mc love his harem(if this ff has harem) 2) will he take care for his harem 3) will there be drama (like one girl does not like harem and breaks up with mc or they start a cold war and so on or mc can't take her so he tells her to forget him and find someone else)
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Whose the harem members?

Nyarlathotep00:1) Yes 2)Yes 3)It is a spoiler so don't read if don't want to know too much... a relationship won't be like 'Hey, Miss. I want a harem. Join!' 'Sure'. No, I want to make different approaches for the girls. Some might not mind the idea, but others will dislike it as they want the MC for themselves. But not at the level you described.
DetectiveHarem
DetectiveHaremLv14

umu that's good to hear i don't like people who judge others own their own views because they don't like something specially people who think they know everything lol

LoweCypher
LoweCypherLv4

A very reasonably written review. I will take a read despite the "harem" tag and low expectation of this not being a pokegarbo fic in hopes that your review is fairly done.

LoweCypher
LoweCypherLv4

A very reasonably written review. I will take a read despite the "harem" tag and low expectation of this not being a pokegarbo fic in hopes that your review is fairly done.

The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

the question is lemon or not?

DaoistmXBnrL
DaoistmXBnrLLv4

lemons?

Nyarlathotep00:Thanks for the positive review... and thanks for reading.
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Pervert_In_NetLv6

well, let's go. the story is very good, the development is good, the interaction between the characters is good, the personality is good, everything is great in this story. however there are still some things that I personally did not like. FIRST: it was the speed of history. I read until chapter 8, the epilogue of vol.1, and I found the development very slow, the chapters are long, I don't know exactly how much, but about 5000 words or more, and with so many words these 8 chapters could cover almost 50 chapters from other stories, and despite that Mc is only 5 or 6 years old, so far the story is more like a slice of life than anything else. SECOND: it was that the author decided to make one of the taboos of stories of reincarnation that was Mc talking about his reincarnation with his mother. from that point on I felt that the interaction between Mc and his mother was completely forced, not because the author wrote this interaction in a bad way, but because, with you aware that your mother knows that despite his infantile body he he is already an *****, the way they act simply "does not make sense", so the situation does not seem to fit, so for me the interaction between the MC and his mother after this point were situations that I did not like to read, I preferred Mc's interaction with any other character than reading him and his mother talking. THIRD: it's a very personal thing so it doesn't serve as a criticism, which is the fact that the MC's personality seems to be that of a "hero" if you know what I mean. personally I prefer more selfish characters, who act for themselves or for those he likes, but so far it doesn’t seem to be the case for this character, at least I understand his personality (SPOLER: and I’m not just talking about how he acted to save Rias and Sona). Overall the story is great and very well done, unlike other authors who write without thinking too much to kill time, the author seems to be taking it seriously, but personally I think the author should increase the pace of the story (I'm not talking about chapter updates, but the speed at which the story goes).

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