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NatsumeRikka
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2020-11-20 02:24

Came here from author's other novel. Have high expectations, especially with this fresh plot. And I'm pumped that it's 3rd pov xDDD So far it's been good, but still a lil' space for improvement ;) Fighting author-kun~ . . .

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