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Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv44yr
2020-11-11 17:11

umr jalwon mein basar ho ye zaruri to nahin har shab-e-gham ki sahar ho, ye zaruri to nahin~ nind to dard ke bistar pe bhi aa sakti hai un ki aaghosh mein sar ho, ye zaruri to nahin~ sab ki nazron mein ho saqi ye zaruri hai magar sab pe saqi ki nazar ho, ye zaruri to nahin~ Aag ko khel pantangon ne bana rakha hai Sabko anjaam ka darr ho, ye zaroori to nahin~ Zindagi ka safr tanha hi katega Saaqi Har musafir ka hamsafr ho, ye zaroori to nahin~

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ghostrino
ghostrinoLv4

Best Review.

Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4

Best comment on the best review.

ghostrino:Best Review.
Jano871996
Jano871996Lv5

wah wah wah

Jano871996
Jano871996Lv5

wah wah

Wardan_J
Wardan_JLv3

I like how it says "Reveal Spoiler," but when you tap on it; the Spoiler is in a completely different language and you can't use a translate button to read it

Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4

haha. It was just a joke, and it isn't even a spoiler related to the story.. heck, it is just poetry.

Wardan_J:I like how it says "Reveal Spoiler," but when you tap on it; the Spoiler is in a completely different language and you can't use a translate button to read it
Wardan_J
Wardan_JLv3

🤣

Bird_0f_Hermes:haha. It was just a joke, and it isn't even a spoiler related to the story.. heck, it is just poetry.
ethan_WArwilted
ethan_WArwiltedLv1

ah yes, definitely your mother tongue huh, so im guessing your wn(Unsealing emptiness, check it out its really good) is based on on true story huh? and i predict that your age is a thousand yrs old , and transmigrate to this meh world and share you life stories eiy? and also what you write is actually a code for you and your brethrens to communicate.(**. that part where mc killed luthien is really really sad and kekw at the same time)

Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4

😳 it is actually not my mother tongue lol. but about my age... how did you know ;-;

ethan_WArwilted:ah yes, definitely your mother tongue huh, so im guessing your wn(Unsealing emptiness, check it out its really good) is based on on true story huh? and i predict that your age is a thousand yrs old , and transmigrate to this meh world and share you life stories eiy? and also what you write is actually a code for you and your brethrens to communicate.(**. that part where mc killed luthien is really really sad and kekw at the same time)
R_a_v_an
R_a_v_anLv13

Iske Sajdo mai asar ho,. .. ye zaruri too nahiiii! !!😁😁😁

ReF4SH
ReF4SHLv13

Best reply to the best comment on the best review.

Bird_0f_Hermes:Best comment on the best review.
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