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2021-03-24 15:41

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 24/03/2021 @chap30 (released chap till date: 30) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: For all the Harem lovers. Interesting but at the same time confusing and weird. There are funny moments i liked long review: pros: 1) This is not exactly 'original' since i read stories about exorcists but the concept itself is not very well known and since it is not popular this turns out interesting. Will be interesting to see it in the future 2) The writing style is good. Maybe because the author is already experienced but except for few negligible mistakes the writing is pretty smooth. 3) I am a harem supporter so yeah that's a plus from me. This novel has interesting girls and i guess this won't be like many other novels where mc just picks girls for the sake of Harem. I am waiting for more emotional interactions. 4) Man I love the characters and dialogues between those characters. They have their own personalities and thinking. Kudos to author for doing such an amazing job! 5) cons: 1) [Not really a CONS] World building and plot is confusing, nothing is clear yet. Many concepts author introduced are confusing as well. We don't know exactly what is happening but then again it is just 30 chapters, you can't judge a novel just based on 30 chapters. 2) This is a light hearted novel. There is almost no tension. At least I never felt any tension. But yeah it's only 30 chaps till now. 3) updates, this novel is inconsistent in updates at least till now it is. But yeah the author said he will do regular updates soon, so i am waiting for it :) 4) pacing is a bit weird. How should i put it, it jumps all over the places. The time skip after 2nd chap was pretty weird considering the FL's sudden circumstances (won't give spoilers). IMO: - Nothing, this novel is developing pretty well. Waiting for more updates in the future:) RATINGS: writing: 8.5/10 (pro-2) update: 7.5/10 (con-3) plot: 7/10 (pro-1, con-1&2) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-3&4) pacing: 8/10 (con-4) dialogues: 9/10 (pro-4) entertainment: 9/10 OVERALL: 4.1/5 Conclusion: This novel has excellent potential! Even though I said it many times, I am seriously waiting for more updates:) Next review after chap 100 WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC is somewhere between hero and anti hero, consciously or subconsciously & due to various circumstances mostly leaning towards hero... Like he will be saving people from 'impurities' but yeah this is about exorcists so expect that. Sometimes he is cold and badass tho, an inconsistent personality which I actually like it.... - Also mc acts immature few times, but yeah he is just 18 y/o so that is normal. - Even tho author said he does not have complex, I feel like he still has some inferiority complex.

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NoWoRRyMaN
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Thanks for the detailed and honest review!

Crazy_Cronie_2
Crazy_Cronie_2Lv4

hey buddy, how many women are there in MC's harem in the king's mandate

NoWoRRyMaN:Thanks for the detailed and honest review!
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