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2020-11-20 01:45

Well, well, well... I just have read four chapters of this great story and I you, my fellow writer, you have my attention. Cannot wait to see how the MC will become a great guy and fulfilling his promise. You sir, deserve a drink for this work.

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Thanks for the review

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