Night_Builder

can you tell me the name of the fanfic ? sounds interesting, and I'd like to read it

When using Chat Gpt to help your writing I advise some for of editing the text because sometimes it creates long and stuffy description which shouldn't be there, believe I know from experience. And at the dialogue my best advice would be to write it yourself rather than let gpt write it, because it gives it makes it too mechanical and uses words which, in my opinion won't ever be used in a normal dialogue. I don't consider myself some great writer but I do like your ff and think that this will help, if you wish, to improve your writing. Now I haven't read past this chapter at this moment, and if area already doing what I spoke about above, awesome, if not I hope you do consider it.

it's the small snake that he got last time when he went to the Star Dou Forest.

Good idea. I'll try to post it this saturday.

Don't worry, for the MC I already planned most of his ss.

Close. In the donghua, if I'm not mistaken, Dugu Bo states that even if he expelled most of the poison there is still some left in his body. (i could be wrong, I'm too sure). Thus, since his poison is a lot more stronger than that of Dugu Bo's when he was the same age, it made sense that the effects of Xin's poison are stronger and harder to deal with.

yes. due to the poison, he needs a strong body and will to handle it, and he needs high physical strength to withstand higher aged spirit rings. So at this stage physical strength > cultivation speed

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yes