Item: The Legacy System
Rating: 3.2
Author: Brezer

BrezerLv144yr

2021-02-15 19:52

this could be a good story if it went off the description but it doesn't . the start is inline , guy goes back before the world goes crazy with a system......but does he spend his time getting ready.. nope. there is very little system stuff or training. it devolves into a cliche filled young master type mc trying to manipulate women into his harem/slave system . an example is he says how after the world changes how there is wide spread starvation from lack of food so what does he do next he becomes part owner in a restaurant and then wants to start a chain of them. mc takes a poisoned ninja as a cooking disciple then gives him a system and talks about giving him his cultivation style since none are for sale in the shop but he doesn't then sends him to Africa to kill rebels . (later they are for sale somehow even though he didn't upgrade the system which he is scared to because he doesn't trust but he has been running around like an idiot trying to get friends/slaves/comrads?.. the story starts in a dark place, betrayed by family and friends and the killed . he is mad, angry and wants revenge , ok a good story start but what we get is a guy that makes drama every day chasing women and it gets so convoluted is silly, there is a kidnapping scheme that goes on for chapters that just makes you skip, read a few lines of each chapter to see if it's still taking place if so just go to next chapter till it was over. this mc should be training and getting xp every day but he doesn't, well he fights a lot but he just knocks them out .. but later finds out he gets more xp if he kills them lol this guy is supposed to me a 1k yr old emperor that has climbed through mountains of corpses but he just knocks people out that attack him... if you are bored and want to read a wannabe Japanese /Chinese cultivation story with chan this and chan that (only from the mc not anyone else) and just want a harem story go for it otherwise it's a waste of time even for toilet reading .

The Legacy System

crazy_immortal

3.7

855 Chs

Liked by 115 people

Replies28

SmilingReader99Lv14

wish I read this before reading

4yr

PowerArmorGuyLv12

Thanks for the heads up.

4yr

AutumnSolstice13Lv4

Thank God I read the comments first 😅😅😅

4yr

RedzethLv14

You saved me a headache

4yr

Diana_GerthLv1

I get u

4yr

fran007Lv3

thanks!! i have enough stupid MCs in my library.

4yr

grimreaper906Lv2

Dude, the even for toilet reading got me

3yr

DreamstrafeLv15

thanks for the heads up M8, this sounds utterly atrocious, i saw the description and thought it might be decent... thanks for saving me from reading this garbage

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ImmortaliLv6

You should read Worlds' Apocalypse Online if you haven't. The mc is decent and he behaves how a person who has been given a second chance should.

3yr

ShadowInLightLv15

go look at fallen lightbringer's return. start is kinda like this, mc dies, get sent back to before the system was added and he actually trains and prepares before it starts again

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pittsLv13

Thanks for headsup. Already have enough MCs that dont make sense

3yr

Enlightened_IdiotLv2

Yeah World Apocalypse Online is good but i get dissapointed when he accept a master, I know he didnt step in saint realm and has many flawed skill, but in the beginning I read it, im expecting for the mc to learn by himself but accept a master...and when I read or see a word "my shifu" i get a feeling that im being annoyed and want to drop the Novel.. tell me if im wrong, his master got to the saint realm by himself and our mc cant? and he just accept a master like that, Im expecting for the mc to be stronger without the backing of her master but what I get? mc says: "im a baihua disciple" and he receive a resources from the sect, and her master alone getting stronger when she is young and step into saint realm and our mc cant and needs a sect to be stronger? Im ok for our Mc getting a connection but im not ok mc using a backing of sect to get stronger, sorry for the long comment...

Immortali:You should read Worlds' Apocalypse Online if you haven't. The mc is decent and he behaves how a person who has been given a second chance should.

3yr

ImmortaliLv6

I know the feeling. At times his master feels like she the mc actually. Remember how she always seem to breakthrough faster than the MC? Or how she defies all common sense and makes the MC's progress seem a little lackluster?

Enlightened_Idiot:Yeah World Apocalypse Online is good but i get dissapointed when he accept a master, I know he didnt step in saint realm and has many flawed skill, but in the beginning I read it, im expecting for the mc to learn by himself but accept a master...and when I read or see a word "my shifu" i get a feeling that im being annoyed and want to drop the Novel.. tell me if im wrong, his master got to the saint realm by himself and our mc cant? and he just accept a master like that, Im expecting for the mc to be stronger without the backing of her master but what I get? mc says: "im a baihua disciple" and he receive a resources from the sect, and her master alone getting stronger when she is young and step into saint realm and our mc cant and needs a sect to be stronger? Im ok for our Mc getting a connection but im not ok mc using a backing of sect to get stronger, sorry for the long comment...

3yr

Enlightened_IdiotLv2

ohh... im still in chapter 200, sorry for the lack of information cause i feel depressed when he is proud that his master are stronger than him... mc thought when talking to someone: "you didnt know my master is a Saint Realm"...thats why I just paused reading this, I have a question, is her master step above saint realm? if he still rely on his master and the backing of the sect to get stronger, it will impossible for me to go back to read this Novel, (Im still reading this if mc didnt use her backing, and just want to correct his flawed skill to his master)

Immortali:I know the feeling. At times his master feels like she the mc actually. Remember how she always seem to breakthrough faster than the MC? Or how she defies all common sense and makes the MC's progress seem a little lackluster?

3yr

Enlightened_IdiotLv2

yeah, and im just curious why theres no comment asking why mc feels like not an actual mc and her master is like a real mc...

3yr

ImmortaliLv6

At pg 200 I think the master is still a saint. A very strong saint. Later it's revealed they have a very interesting and unique connection due to time travel. It's not romantic though. **************SPOILER ALERT**************SPOILER ALERT********** *********************************************************************** ****In the distant past he was her senior.****** Anyway, she always manages to stay like 2 realms/levels above him. He never seem to catch up. She doesn't appear often in the story but whenever she does she still ahead surprisingly. She also seems to have more dramatic breakthroughs. ***********************************************************

Enlightened_Idiot:ohh... im still in chapter 200, sorry for the lack of information cause i feel depressed when he is proud that his master are stronger than him... mc thought when talking to someone: "you didnt know my master is a Saint Realm"...thats why I just paused reading this, I have a question, is her master step above saint realm? if he still rely on his master and the backing of the sect to get stronger, it will impossible for me to go back to read this Novel, (Im still reading this if mc didnt use her backing, and just want to correct his flawed skill to his master)

3yr

ImmortaliLv6

Hahaha! I've had that kind of question numerous times. I have seen issues in various books and surprisingly no one seems to bother commenting about the same. All I see is a bunch of complimenting comments and some jokes.

Enlightened_Idiot:yeah, and im just curious why theres no comment asking why mc feels like not an actual mc and her master is like a real mc...

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Enlightened_IdiotLv2

now im being annoyed... its like mc cant overpower his master, its understandable if he is not using a cheat like a war god systen cause our mc is not a genius and its takes many years to get into higher realm, but you know, mc have a war god system which can help him achieved high, and then the result is he cant overpower or maybe compare to his master, even though he has a war god system, and now it come to the point were we think her master is the true mc, and not her..... maybe im just overthinkng things, and her system can only give him skill or like that?

Immortali:At pg 200 I think the master is still a saint. A very strong saint. Later it's revealed they have a very interesting and unique connection due to time travel. It's not romantic though. **************SPOILER ALERT**************SPOILER ALERT********** *********************************************************************** ****In the distant past he was her senior.****** Anyway, she always manages to stay like 2 realms/levels above him. He never seem to catch up. She doesn't appear often in the story but whenever she does she still ahead surprisingly. She also seems to have more dramatic breakthroughs. ***********************************************************

3yr

Enlightened_IdiotLv2

maybe every people has different taste?

Immortali:Hahaha! I've had that kind of question numerous times. I have seen issues in various books and surprisingly no one seems to bother commenting about the same. All I see is a bunch of complimenting comments and some jokes.

3yr

ImmortaliLv6

The author has hinted she might have a very mysterious background than we are currently aware. I don't what it is but she might have own cheat codes to carry her through. Seems pretty important to the plot though.

Enlightened_Idiot:now im being annoyed... its like mc cant overpower his master, its understandable if he is not using a cheat like a war god systen cause our mc is not a genius and its takes many years to get into higher realm, but you know, mc have a war god system which can help him achieved high, and then the result is he cant overpower or maybe compare to his master, even though he has a war god system, and now it come to the point were we think her master is the true mc, and not her..... maybe im just overthinkng things, and her system can only give him skill or like that?

3yr

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oceansageLv4

Mc was stupidly retarded and socially inept at beginning of his life, but after living over for more than 1000 years and going through hardship and betrayals, he is ONLY retarded after transmigration. His first reaction after transmigration was screamed in joy even before confirming his surrounding and this dude is supposedly lived over 1k years and has killed countless people.

4yr

RairanLv14

Horny, trashy mc? ✔ 1000 yo retard with brain like sieve ✔ sad past ✔ deserves everything that comes his way? ✔ Might have changed, I couldn't deal with this bs any longer. (11th chapter) 1st ever review, which is equally as bad as this novel. P.S. Author, I suggest reading couple of books about world building and actually thinking before describing characters. You've written about how mc is 1000 yo, yet behaves like a brat. I bet his 79 points in intelligence is probably his iq (His physical stats are like 0.6). He hates his family, even tho he behaves equally as bad towards other human beings.

4yr

Dao_Of_LazinessLv4

I like this story so far. Not like your typical cultivation story where you get drug buffed by random ass plants (is that the right way to say it?) and isn’t always cultivating and shit. Also I like the way he’s taking revenge on Tina. Good job

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fist_immortalLv12

Tbh i enjoy harrm novels but Not novels where the mc just thinks with his dong. Our mc gets betrayed by his closest brothers and actual brother who tells him his harem of wives all cucked him and his First thought in class is to add his fucking Teacher to his harem not even prepare from The Apocalypse thats about to happen. fck this shit man, this mc is worse than a fucking animal at least animals think about survival before trying fck eachother

4yr

AstralSageLv4

The story is pretty average and the plot development contradicts the character psychology and development. Its a SMUT disguised as a retarded MC revenge story.

4yr

Abz_S_JLv14

it's bad. The description was interesting and the first chapter was good but the moment he lands back in time, we get the cliche young master wanting women scenario. His focus should be to raise his strength instead of hitting on women right of the bat. Honestly, there are 100s of novels like this one out there. Not original in the slightest. MC is literally a moron which holds true from the first chapter title. all in all, it's bad.

3yr

LordmoonlightLv11

won't beat around the bush mc doesn't seem mature for a guy who build a empire and the fact that hes like any perverted kid suchs I mean the first thing he thought about was girls not to get stronger but girls I can't take this type of harem bruh you need strength before you think about those shit and he should know that I think you need to reread your story now like how it's at 100+ chapters and see even though you have your view point it's just like every bad harem we see now a days shameless and perverted mc won't give this a bad review but wont give it 5 stars for a revenge story it started way too wrong your back in the past and you think with your dick first without the system constant mock that the mc is weak for a 10000 year old dude it's kinda sa

4yr

LordmoonlightLv11

smh you shouldn't went premium you need to fix up your story and get better reviews in the comments section before making people have to pay to read you already have one story on that you should have used this one to grow that's all I had to say I saw improvement in the last couple chapters but now i wont know if your going to improve anymore

4yr

whadipLv4

Okay. It had a nice start but it went downhill from there. The writing flow, thought process and actions of the mc and others just don't make no sense in addition to being cringey. The flow is just haphazard although there are some good bits and pieces here and there. Dropping.

3yr

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