SmilingReader99

Repeating something constantly has never been cool. Especially when you have characters talk as if a key point hasn't just been said only for them to react after it's repeated a second, sometimes third time.

FINALLY

I think the reason you're not getting the attention you want at the moment is because of your arc placement and length. You could have kept Kagami around the village to build up characters around him, get to that 10% he was aiming for, and then go back to war where he could learn how to do his new sword attack. Also, the love intreast you just introduced came so far out of left field and is so forced I full body cringed reading chapter they kissed in. I have never done that in my life it was so bad. If you have to start over, do it from after he completed he gets to Konoha.

All you had to do was pay the toll. simple as that. you knew how much it was before you got there.

Hell no, i really don't think he even needs it. There are a lot of potential power ups and abilities he can obtain just from being a Saiyan. There are so many, in fact, that I doubt you can even implement them all, let alone add another entirely different power base on top of it.

Thanks for the chapter. Was really looking forward to more action and less dialog.

I don't think Spectra should have been killed off so quickly. I think this sort of end should have been saved for a second encounter.

If he ever has to point his sword at Millis again, it'll definitely be a bit further down the road. But by then, I doubt you'll be enough to handle Rygar.

There is a meme that hasn't been quoted yet, and I think it's a crime that it hasn't yet. Missed the chance to use it a few times already.