SmilingReader99

Knew this was bound to happen. Is Izuku still saving Bakugo in this fiction? Izuku doesn't get OFA without doing that. Dante can confront his dad after Izuku saves Bakugo.

I got a few ideas that I hope help: You can start with having Bell come along to join the familia. Have Orcbolg teach Bell how to fight and survive in the dungeon. You can have 1 or 2 of Orcbolg's old party members appear (not the Lizardman or the Elf, will be hard to explain) in Orario along with some monsters from the goblin slayer world. You can have Orcbolg explore Orario more, have him find an Alchemist and a personal blacksmith or something. That's all I got for idea's.

Really going the pay to win route?

I support this idea.

Repeating something constantly has never been cool. Especially when you have characters talk as if a key point hasn't just been said only for them to react after it's repeated a second, sometimes third time.

FINALLY

I think the reason you're not getting the attention you want at the moment is because of your arc placement and length. You could have kept Kagami around the village to build up characters around him, get to that 10% he was aiming for, and then go back to war where he could learn how to do his new sword attack. Also, the love intreast you just introduced came so far out of left field and is so forced I full body cringed reading chapter they kissed in. I have never done that in my life it was so bad. If you have to start over, do it from after he completed he gets to Konoha.

All you had to do was pay the toll. simple as that. you knew how much it was before you got there.

Hell no, i really don't think he even needs it. There are a lot of potential power ups and abilities he can obtain just from being a Saiyan. There are so many, in fact, that I doubt you can even implement them all, let alone add another entirely different power base on top of it.