I really like the way you’ve been developping your story. The MC doesn’t just see this as a game world, people pretty much react how they would when stuff happens, there’s constant progress instead of insta-op, and it’s cool that he still has some interactions with the Courier. The way the system is used works really well, keeping the classic fallout upgrades and adding some nifty add-ons. Keep up the good work and i am still hoping he can find some kind of love in the hell hole he finds himself in.
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LIKEAgreed, it was great. If anyone's reading the reviews and is thinking of dropping, give it a shot. If you've tried reading it, and feel like dropping during the prologue, you have my permission to skip to chapter 52 guilt free. (The pre-system prologue is a good read, just not what everyone expects when they think, "Fallout Fanfic" which is, "travel the wastes" not, "grow up, avoiding BOS cult grooming in a boring bunker." Chap 52 is right before the system gets introduced.)