Review Detail of ThePandaCritic in Marvel: Elysium (Old)
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Started with logic but ended up breaking the same logic it's like the author puts no thought into what he's writing. If you establish rules you have to abide by them, for example, u don't want him to be super smart cause he's going to above people and not be able to connect with anyone yet when he's powered up he gets super smart also being able to recall stuff and understand anything he reads...wasn't that you were trying to avoid. Every single chapter mentions the cosmic entity guarding the multiverse yet the Mc does nothing to either kill it or fight. He has all the resources known to marvel n Dc so the only thing stopping him is u the author with your lack of creativity. If you can't comprehend that don't make your Mc so Op that you can't utilize their powers in a way that is not a brain drain.
Marvel: Elysium (Old)
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He is smart but not Reed or Stark smart. He just has the extra bonus of a photographic memory. He isn't trying to figure out things, he has sources to learn from. You don't need to be Reed Richards smart to figure out how to create something when you have a literal template to base it on. And also Most of MC's Technology was developed by Paris. The actually smart one in the group And I like your criticism but think for a minute, I am trying to write a story here that would reach hopefully 100 chapters do you think imma just hand him overpowered things from his Resource dimension. This would literally make the story end in the first chapter. Op MC's are difficult to write man
the whining about cosmic entities got old real fast the worst part for me was the infinite resources form everywhere. if knowledge is a resource than from a certain perspective humans are too. marvel has more then enough crazy stuff without adding things from the omniverse. the writer might say paris made most things but all the MC has to do is learn it from his infinite resource. isnt that how he build paris? but instead of using this he actually went and robbed knull 0_o he doesnt help along the energy department cause 'iron man', there is more than just the arc reactor you know. superconductors, batteries, solar panels, etc etc. so yeah your Mc is nerfing himself through stupid use of powers and what he makes he doesnt really uses, so far
He is like Gilgamesh so much op stuff but dont use it cause of stupid reasons. I thought the mc has "photo graphic memory" where is it?
scyfly:the whining about cosmic entities got old real fast the worst part for me was the infinite resources form everywhere. if knowledge is a resource than from a certain perspective humans are too. marvel has more then enough crazy stuff without adding things from the omniverse. the writer might say paris made most things but all the MC has to do is learn it from his infinite resource. isnt that how he build paris? but instead of using this he actually went and robbed knull 0_o he doesnt help along the energy department cause 'iron man', there is more than just the arc reactor you know. superconductors, batteries, solar panels, etc etc. so yeah your Mc is nerfing himself through stupid use of powers and what he makes he doesnt really uses, so far
Im19:He is like Gilgamesh so much op stuff but dont use it cause of stupid reasons. I thought the mc has "photo graphic memory" where is it?
okay let's be serious. if given Infinite resources, you will get bored really quickly because you have everything you need as for the Multiversal being he is afraid of, an explanation was given. The Living tribunal is nigh-omnipotent and so powerful that to this day the only person who has actually killed him is Thanos (Astral regulator) who absorbed him the Beyonder both retcon and pre retcon only killed his M-body. just a projection made to appear in that specific universe. MC doesn't want to go against him because there are so many ways The Living tribunal could kill him. 1. Stop his abilities from working just like it did the Infinity stones 2. kill him before he could even bring out any object to grant him power enough to equal the golden man 3. he could simply trap him in time 4. Erase him from existence before he was born, he could still do it even when MC is grown (Omnipotence remember) MC is right to fear him, it shows he has common sense. you don't go to some one's house and start doing as you like simply because you have the resources to do so. and also have you read any story or fanfic where the MC has infinite resources they end in 10 chapters and if they go any longer then you just stop enjoying it if you are enjoying it then the MC isn't utilizing the Infinite resources to it's full potential that's why everyone gets tired of those books with the Chinese MC that needs to spend money or is basically handed everything by some stupid system
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It actually made sense I did not look at it from a different perspectiveđ§, maybe I've been watching too many chinese novels with their stupid plot armor, and op systems that it affected my thinking, cause lately I've been being too one dimensional. Anyways thank youâ¤ď¸
king_frosh:okay let's be serious. if given Infinite resources, you will get bored really quickly because you have everything you need as for the Multiversal being he is afraid of, an explanation was given. The Living tribunal is nigh-omnipotent and so powerful that to this day the only person who has actually killed him is Thanos (Astral regulator) who absorbed him the Beyonder both retcon and pre retcon only killed his M-body. just a projection made to appear in that specific universe. MC doesn't want to go against him because there are so many ways The Living tribunal could kill him. 1. Stop his abilities from working just like it did the Infinity stones 2. kill him before he could even bring out any object to grant him power enough to equal the golden man 3. he could simply trap him in time 4. Erase him from existence before he was born, he could still do it even when MC is grown (Omnipotence remember) MC is right to fear him, it shows he has common sense. you don't go to some one's house and start doing as you like simply because you have the resources to do so. and also have you read any story or fanfic where the MC has infinite resources they end in 10 chapters and if they go any longer then you just stop enjoying it if you are enjoying it then the MC isn't utilizing the Infinite resources to it's full potential that's why everyone gets tired of those books with the Chinese MC that needs to spend money or is basically handed everything by some stupid system
I don't think I read this comment before but I get your point but it says he doesn't want to focus on it because he could do better check Mc's history in everything he has focused on, he either creates an OP version of it or just something new entirely that removes the need for it he focuses on it then The Arc Reactor may not come to fruition. it never said anything about them not making better versions of renewable energy I mean no matter how slow they are in his Energy department, they still have an A.I helping them
scyfly:the whining about cosmic entities got old real fast the worst part for me was the infinite resources form everywhere. if knowledge is a resource than from a certain perspective humans are too. marvel has more then enough crazy stuff without adding things from the omniverse. the writer might say paris made most things but all the MC has to do is learn it from his infinite resource. isnt that how he build paris? but instead of using this he actually went and robbed knull 0_o he doesnt help along the energy department cause 'iron man', there is more than just the arc reactor you know. superconductors, batteries, solar panels, etc etc. so yeah your Mc is nerfing himself through stupid use of powers and what he makes he doesnt really uses, so far
I new and just read the comments and I would like to point the constant wining part that not been addressed hahaha
king_frosh:I don't think I read this comment before but I get your point but it says he doesn't want to focus on it because he could do better check Mc's history in everything he has focused on, he either creates an OP version of it or just something new entirely that removes the need for it he focuses on it then The Arc Reactor may not come to fruition. it never said anything about them not making better versions of renewable energy I mean no matter how slow they are in his Energy department, they still have an A.I helping them
DaoistQsggYR:I new and just read the comments and I would like to point the constant wining part that not been addressed hahaha
king_frosh:He is smart but not Reed or Stark smart. He just has the extra bonus of a photographic memory. He isn't trying to figure out things, he has sources to learn from. You don't need to be Reed Richards smart to figure out how to create something when you have a literal template to base it on. And also Most of MC's Technology was developed by Paris. The actually smart one in the group And I like your criticism but think for a minute, I am trying to write a story here that would reach hopefully 100 chapters do you think imma just hand him overpowered things from his Resource dimension. This would literally make the story end in the first chapter. Op MC's are difficult to write man
