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Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv24yr
2020-11-21 12:53

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? how many girls? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? how many girls?

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1Primo
1PrimoLv14

You just... seem so desperate.

Raven_Milles
Raven_MillesLv13

no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no non no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no do not ruin this book I love this book just the it is

Raven_Milles
Raven_MillesLv13

no harems

ViciousHandler
ViciousHandlerLv5

Get a job and maybe You can pay for some *** service.

BrunoRMN
BrunoRMNLv10

no

Lutheris_right
Lutheris_rightLv2

dayum

ViciousHandler:Get a job and maybe You can pay for some *** service.
Drakul
DrakulLv13

read some of this man's comments, and for all that is holy i can't understand his(and many others) obsession with harem, especially those unrealisticly huge harem that ranges from 3 to a city block of girls. the thought of satisfying two females already a nightmare let alone 20. Final poimt is how do you even set up 10+ girls in a harem? if you develop them then the strory just becomes a harem building strory which is lame and if you don't you just read 2 dimensional chick fall unrealisticly fall for an emotionaly unavailable dude who will never be able to meet their need but that's okay cause he has main character juice? oh well everyone has their favourite brand of escape from reality, who am i to judge yours i guess.

Elmarc_Yarka
Elmarc_YarkaLv13

Aight, dude, come on, leave the poor man alone. He's already so severely *** deprived, you don't have to mock his dream like that.

Drakul:read some of this man's comments, and for all that is holy i can't understand his(and many others) obsession with harem, especially those unrealisticly huge harem that ranges from 3 to a city block of girls. the thought of satisfying two females already a nightmare let alone 20. Final poimt is how do you even set up 10+ girls in a harem? if you develop them then the strory just becomes a harem building strory which is lame and if you don't you just read 2 dimensional chick fall unrealisticly fall for an emotionaly unavailable dude who will never be able to meet their need but that's okay cause he has main character juice? oh well everyone has their favourite brand of escape from reality, who am i to judge yours i guess.
Quidanstealsnovels
QuidanstealsnovelsLv10

People who cry for harems either kids or lonely grown men who are still virgins and have no idea how much hard work a single woman is xD

Darudadu
DarudaduLv14

Ngl, other than liking harems, you're one disgusting motherf*cker base on your comments.

jojojajahelp
jojojajahelpLv4

I looked at his profile... All of his comments relate to harem or NTR...

1Primo:You just... seem so desperate.
bluepumpkin_315
bluepumpkin_315Lv5

This dude never get into threesome Satisfying two girls already a nightmare bro imagine 3 or more lol

llseasonll
llseasonllLv3

Es mujeriego o es solo una heroina MC Normie Si es así es decepcionante de novela Sólo con 3 deseos deja mucho ala imaginación.

Azmuth
AzmuthLv4

You are going to compare yourself to a Vampire or a werewolf ?

bluepumpkin_315:This dude never get into threesome Satisfying two girls already a nightmare bro imagine 3 or more lol
Azmuth
AzmuthLv4

If you are Handsome and Rich then getting girlfriends is as easy as breathing . The question is "Do you have enough stamina" ? If you have and also have enough patience and an Alpha like mentality then Congratulations , you can have a HAREM .

Quidanstealsnovels:People who cry for harems either kids or lonely grown men who are still virgins and have no idea how much hard work a single woman is xD
Eli_52
Eli_52Lv11

I feel insulted as an adult virgin, to be compared to harem hungry creatures

Quidanstealsnovels:People who cry for harems either kids or lonely grown men who are still virgins and have no idea how much hard work a single woman is xD
Elmarc_Yarka
Elmarc_YarkaLv13

Bro, does he even have the right tool to satisfy one woman?

bluepumpkin_315:This dude never get into threesome Satisfying two girls already a nightmare bro imagine 3 or more lol
nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

Eli_52:I feel insulted as an adult virgin, to be compared to harem hungry creatures
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Oldest_dream07
Oldest_dream07Lv4

this is nothing bro i have read novels with harem of 3000 girls the mc made a whole sect of girls his harem and I was like why the f

Drakul:read some of this man's comments, and for all that is holy i can't understand his(and many others) obsession with harem, especially those unrealisticly huge harem that ranges from 3 to a city block of girls. the thought of satisfying two females already a nightmare let alone 20. Final poimt is how do you even set up 10+ girls in a harem? if you develop them then the strory just becomes a harem building strory which is lame and if you don't you just read 2 dimensional chick fall unrealisticly fall for an emotionaly unavailable dude who will never be able to meet their need but that's okay cause he has main character juice? oh well everyone has their favourite brand of escape from reality, who am i to judge yours i guess.
Venerable_Far
Venerable_FarLv3

don't insult me im 16 detest harems

Quidanstealsnovels:People who cry for harems either kids or lonely grown men who are still virgins and have no idea how much hard work a single woman is xD
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