Quidanstealsnovels

Meh its horrible. You can tell its a translation, spelling errors and it reads horribly. Can't get into it when its that bad. I don't understand how read it, I lose immersion every sentence.

The writing is awkward, can really tell its a translation. Feels so robotic to read.

Horrible story, meant to be a 20 year odd mentally yet acts like a literal toddler. You have maids lusting after a physically 5 year old (but technically 2 days old) child. Distinguishing. Plot barely exists, such a boring power system that just hands him stuff for existing. Entire novel is just some weird pedo self insert 'harem' mess. Written by a teen whose never actually spoke to a woman before. Embarrassing that people enjoy this, go outside people.

It reads like a chinese novel, fights a 5 year old so they 7 year old wants to fight him, beats him so the grandfather is agressive with him. Why turn naruto into another low quality chinese novel. Also the PACE IS TOO DAMN SLOW, everytime the MC says something out loud he then need a paragraph of internal dialogue for some reason. Massive blocks of the chapters that are pointless. Chapters could be half of big, still have the same detail and still be slow paced. Its annoying to read.

so boring, its like a wikipedia page. You not need a paragraph of internal thought after every sentence said out loud.

Aah yeah the kids sound exactly like the people from the auction house, they're meant to be kids ffs.

Stupid boring cliche dialogue. Who ever talks like that, they talk like extremely dull robots with the mentality of 8 year old children and they're all meant to be decades old demon slaying soldiers.

A hidden expert, except he's a 5 year old kid ffs.

It reads so weird. Doesnt sound like any of the characters at all. It reads like a wikipedia page.

Interesting in the beginning, but the authors quality just declines, so many plot holes, MC personality is all over the place. The side characters and old 'strong' characters are honestly stupid. He gets betrayed by the academy? He's literally the strongest student in hundreds of years, completes the tower, is shown to be amazingly strong and yet they just throw him away and try to kill him? WHAT? They literally want strong students to help the dark faction and yet when they have one they don't prioritie him at all? Like he'd be the first thing you try and secure when the actions attacked, but he's just forgotten about and even is attacked by that same faction. Im so confused about that entire situation. What a stupid and badly written arc, i've never seen a story fall down in quality so much so fast.