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2020-11-15 10:10

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CanYouMakeItClear
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(Serious Review and Detailed Review) Hey, I saw that there's a little serious review here, so I thought "why not make one?", and here you go. Valli is a normal Asgardian and a Reincarnated guy from the Modern World. He is not Vali, Odin's son. Some people are still confused as it is right now, but here you go, Valli is a normal Asgardian and not Odin's son, named Vali. MC is reborn 100 years before Thor was born and so older than Thor. As the story goes on and the further we read, every happenings and events felt like "Natural". We can tell that the Author is well versed or just talented in telling stories as the Novel was always from the MC point of view. All the conversations, actions, are Natural and not forced like any other novels out there. I'm not saying all of them, but some of them are. The only downside is the Author's writing. We can already tell from the Synopsis of the story. But, as you can see at the amount of people Voting for this novel getting it as high as Top 5 in the FanFic section, and a Little amount of people complaining about it. I can be sure you will enjoy the story.  Personally, I haven't read Marvel, and I can tell you, even though I haven't read it yet, I still enjoy the story. Why? Because of how you can effortlessly understand the story.  (Overall Ratings) 2 Chapters a Day! Why not? So, 5 stars for me. Writing quality, sorry Author I have to be honest here, so 4 stars? I'm a little bit prejudiced, but hey, I will take the hate. Story Development. Smooth and Natural. 5 stars for me. Character Design. I'm honestly surprised how they were close or How the Author built the character naturally, befitting their status, so 5 stars. (Like how Odin is an Arrogant King, because he is a King and Powerful God, so why not?) World Background. It is Marvel, 5 Stars. That's all! Comment your thoughts or things I miss out, to have people understand more of the story! 40 Chapters Review (Completed) 100 Chapters Review (Not Complete) ...

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Read to chapter 57 (Serious Review): World Background (4stars) because it's fan-fiction...The writing Quality (4stars) is good but not the best I've seen but good, And the updates are frequent (5 stars) on that one, (3Stars) for Story development it's not bad but no great either, and for the grand finale and the rant I have been holding on for weeks (1STAR) FOR Character Design I would have given him (0Stars) if I could!! So MC is too much of a pussy getting suppressed left and right sometimes being powerful and other times not (that's how it felt to me at least) it felt like the author is trying to suppress his strength development as to not make him op but just fails miserably making him appear useless and just keeps acting like a kid, and he is too indecisive for my taste So I know the author wants to make it seem logical and act like real human beings but honestly, I am not here to read logical and real stuff am here to enjoy what little time I have to entertain my self I don't give a shit how real or logical it appears, that's why a lot of people like Chinese protags because they are not that annoying to read it gives you a sense of excitement and they are mostly decisive and act illogical even though you know they shouldn't act like that BUT people still read them As I said this is a novel...its fantasy...its purpose is to entertain...but what do I know this is your book and you are free to write it as you like some people may like this style...but I don't, those are just my though take from them what you want (if any) and improve yourself as to become a better writer Peace!

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96 Chs