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The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor4yr
2020-10-31 02:00

hello, the author here, i will shamelessly give myself 5 stars because i see everything i do perfect, assume me if you can! anyway, i hope you guys write some reviews and start writing comments.

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BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Romance? Harem? Both?

Melshan
MelshanLv7

Harém?

The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

what do you want?

Melshan:Harém?
DaoistLadyKiller
DaoistLadyKillerLv11

I ignore the synopsis to ask the only thing that interests me, harem?

Melshan
MelshanLv7

Harém of course

The_High_Father:what do you want?
The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

what do you want

DaoistLadyKiller:I ignore the synopsis to ask the only thing that interests me, harem?
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

We want harem . Long live harem sect.

The_High_Father:what do you want
The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

....

Shadewind:We want harem . Long live harem sect.
DaoistLadyKiller
DaoistLadyKillerLv11

As you see, I am a simple man

The_High_Father:what do you want
The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

...no comment...

DaoistLadyKiller:As you see, I am a simple man
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DaoistLadyKiller
DaoistLadyKillerLv11

or at least a single waifu

The_High_Father:what do you want
The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

it will be romance? idk. but there will be some one night stands, if you didn't mind m

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The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

you ok with one night stand?

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The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

until now, he killed all his enemies, but he isn't ruthless, just doing what he had to do. in alignment system, he is good neutral, or true neutral

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The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

his talent is increasing, he born with average but with his power, his talent grow

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The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

i will start capitalizing the names

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DaoistLadyKiller
DaoistLadyKillerLv11

lol hahaha

The_High_Father:i will start capitalizing the names
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

So is it harem or single romantic interest? And can you tell me who the first or only romantic interest will be?

The_High_Father:i will start capitalizing the names
The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

i haven't decided yet.

BreezyNovels:So is it harem or single romantic interest? And can you tell me who the first or only romantic interest will be?
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

What is the MC the God of?

The_High_Father:i haven't decided yet.
Other Reviews
CanYouMakeItClear
CanYouMakeItClearLv12

(Serious Review and Detailed Review) Hey, I saw that there's a little serious review here, so I thought "why not make one?", and here you go. Valli is a normal Asgardian and a Reincarnated guy from the Modern World. He is not Vali, Odin's son. Some people are still confused as it is right now, but here you go, Valli is a normal Asgardian and not Odin's son, named Vali. MC is reborn 100 years before Thor was born and so older than Thor. As the story goes on and the further we read, every happenings and events felt like "Natural". We can tell that the Author is well versed or just talented in telling stories as the Novel was always from the MC point of view. All the conversations, actions, are Natural and not forced like any other novels out there. I'm not saying all of them, but some of them are. The only downside is the Author's writing. We can already tell from the Synopsis of the story. But, as you can see at the amount of people Voting for this novel getting it as high as Top 5 in the FanFic section, and a Little amount of people complaining about it. I can be sure you will enjoy the story.  Personally, I haven't read Marvel, and I can tell you, even though I haven't read it yet, I still enjoy the story. Why? Because of how you can effortlessly understand the story.  (Overall Ratings) 2 Chapters a Day! Why not? So, 5 stars for me. Writing quality, sorry Author I have to be honest here, so 4 stars? I'm a little bit prejudiced, but hey, I will take the hate. Story Development. Smooth and Natural. 5 stars for me. Character Design. I'm honestly surprised how they were close or How the Author built the character naturally, befitting their status, so 5 stars. (Like how Odin is an Arrogant King, because he is a King and Powerful God, so why not?) World Background. It is Marvel, 5 Stars. That's all! Comment your thoughts or things I miss out, to have people understand more of the story! 40 Chapters Review (Completed) 100 Chapters Review (Not Complete) ...

Lalalalal2424
Lalalalal2424Lv3

Read to chapter 57 (Serious Review): World Background (4stars) because it's fan-fiction...The writing Quality (4stars) is good but not the best I've seen but good, And the updates are frequent (5 stars) on that one, (3Stars) for Story development it's not bad but no great either, and for the grand finale and the rant I have been holding on for weeks (1STAR) FOR Character Design I would have given him (0Stars) if I could!! So MC is too much of a pussy getting suppressed left and right sometimes being powerful and other times not (that's how it felt to me at least) it felt like the author is trying to suppress his strength development as to not make him op but just fails miserably making him appear useless and just keeps acting like a kid, and he is too indecisive for my taste So I know the author wants to make it seem logical and act like real human beings but honestly, I am not here to read logical and real stuff am here to enjoy what little time I have to entertain my self I don't give a shit how real or logical it appears, that's why a lot of people like Chinese protags because they are not that annoying to read it gives you a sense of excitement and they are mostly decisive and act illogical even though you know they shouldn't act like that BUT people still read them As I said this is a novel...its fantasy...its purpose is to entertain...but what do I know this is your book and you are free to write it as you like some people may like this style...but I don't, those are just my though take from them what you want (if any) and improve yourself as to become a better writer Peace!

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