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Lalalalal2424
Lalalalal2424Lv34yr
2020-11-25 04:06

Read to chapter 57 (Serious Review): World Background (4stars) because it's fan-fiction...The writing Quality (4stars) is good but not the best I've seen but good, And the updates are frequent (5 stars) on that one, (3Stars) for Story development it's not bad but no great either, and for the grand finale and the rant I have been holding on for weeks (1STAR) FOR Character Design I would have given him (0Stars) if I could!! So MC is too much of a pussy getting suppressed left and right sometimes being powerful and other times not (that's how it felt to me at least) it felt like the author is trying to suppress his strength development as to not make him op but just fails miserably making him appear useless and just keeps acting like a kid, and he is too indecisive for my taste So I know the author wants to make it seem logical and act like real human beings but honestly, I am not here to read logical and real stuff am here to enjoy what little time I have to entertain my self I don't give a shit how real or logical it appears, that's why a lot of people like Chinese protags because they are not that annoying to read it gives you a sense of excitement and they are mostly decisive and act illogical even though you know they shouldn't act like that BUT people still read them As I said this is a novel...its fantasy...its purpose is to entertain...but what do I know this is your book and you are free to write it as you like some people may like this style...but I don't, those are just my though take from them what you want (if any) and improve yourself as to become a better writer Peace!

Marvel: A God's Journey.

The_High_Father
4.7
82 Chs

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The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

you know, I'm not gonna delete that because it is a good point, thx

4yr
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Lalalalal2424
Lalalalal2424Lv3

honestly, when I wrote it I thought you wouldn't even read it :v I just wrote the review to get the anger out of my system :') but yeah that was my opinion, keep writing and keep improving author :D

The_High_Father:you know, I'm not gonna delete that because it is a good point, thx
4yr
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The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthor

actually i read it, i said in my sypnosis that low reviews without a solid reason will be deleted, but your review have a reason so...damn.

Lalalalal2424:honestly, when I wrote it I thought you wouldn't even read it :v I just wrote the review to get the anger out of my system :') but yeah that was my opinion, keep writing and keep improving author :D
4yr
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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

this review was even up for a debate to be deleted? No wonder the story is 4.7 stars, but i won't even bother reading it. As i'm sure you have deleted every review that pointed out some retarded shit in this fanfic. So i won't even waste my time.

The_High_Father:you know, I'm not gonna delete that because it is a good point, thx
4yr
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DaoistH7599X
DaoistH7599XLv4

i didn't read the story but what i understand from this review is that he enjoys reading about irrational, idiotic, rush ,temperemental, arrogant people slapping other irrational, idiotic, rush, temperemental, arrogant people. İ hope you can give a slap to reality on demand of your inexistance, may the rational keep you in dark blissful ignorance you enjoy.

2yr
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hello, the author here, i will shamelessly give myself 5 stars because i see everything i do perfect, assume me if you can! anyway, i hope you guys write some reviews and start writing comments.

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