just a fanfic with Japanese protagonist that is a beta and bends like those loose Japanese. ............................................................................
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really? Do you even know the definition of Beta? the world I'm building hasn't even gotten to a single week regarding time. sorry if this isnt your typical Oh I reincarnated so I must be a god. I can do whatever I want since I'm the fking MC cause I reincarnated right?
the personality of your protagonist sucks, that must be because you must be a beta that bends, just like your protagonist afraid of the girls your loose, nobody spoke of powers.
what are you even talking about? are you on crack or something? his full personality hasn't even been estimated yet. if you call the MC beta because of the being late and called to the office scene or the trap in the bathroom scene you're on crack definitely. If not those scenes please give an example on why you call him a beta. this is just so dumb
hahahah you're an emo, your protagonist looks like a japanese fag hahaha, you must be gay, he looks like a scared little bitch when he's around a girl, disgusted
okay now it's confirmed just a troll good bye
just accept face your story sucks, troll for telling the truth? it leaves the internet girl, the personality of its protagonist is disgusted to read, just a disgusting beta.
I mean I still didn't read the story, but I can honestly say Luiz_Ferreira, you are an... interesting man. I hope when you grew older you will understand your way of thinking is just not the only way. Ya know there is a thing called Character Growth. I do not think you will understand yet, and honestly no one cares. But, just think. Your comments are sadly... shameful.
Just like the guy in the comment above me, I still haven't read the story, but you Luiz, I think you are at least ... An eccentric person. I hope you mature and learn to argue.
i already read until chapter 10.. and i dont see any beta ness.. well.. if what you mean is izumi background? actually that guy is kinda cool.. just read horimiya to know what kind of guy he is.. well.. he still typicall jap guy.. ahahaha..
Your argument becomes pretty hollow in the moment you start to just attack the author's character Eu vi no weu perfil q tu é br e sinceramente, do fundo do meu coração, cala a porra da boca e para de envergonhar você mesmo como se tu tivesse 10 anos
will there be world traveling
There is no mc beta in this novel. Just an MC who flirts with girls and treats them like human beings instead of *** dolls.
author-san, it is in this type of troll review that you should use your privilege to delete.
I could, but trolls are a part of life. especially if you're a creator. Just let them be. I want to see what would be the end game of my novel. Would it drown in negative reviews and trolls or would People liking the book and giving a positive review overcome the trolls?
The problem is that 1 bad review, is like idk 5-10 good one's. Just delete it, i skip the ff's with under 4,5 basically every time. And it leave's a bad taste in my mouth seeing a so far, interesting ff get "downgraded" so much. Regardless on what you do, i hope you don't lose motivation. And the other guy was stupid but funny af🤣
I didnt read the novel and Im not sure about it but I can understand his feelings we saw average protagonists for years (Evangelion lol) I think he is just a frustrated teenager because of average mcs its not personal but that doesnt mean he is right .
can you explain? is he a beta or is it just that? any other reasons for 1 star?
Though i didnt read the story, but Miyamura is pretty cool, tattoos and piercings, and long hairstyle 💪💪💪he got style for sure...
