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Spelloyal
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2020-10-28 14:57

this novel is very good, but the author introduced many characters from different anime in a few chapters and that worries me a lot. I've seen more than one FF dropped because the author was unable to develop the story and ended up getting lost with the number of characters. This is actually a very common mistake made by beginning authors in crossovers.

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I can confidently say that when it comes to a slice of life multi-crossover story, this fanfic is one of, if not the best. Unlike most of the authors here in Webnovel, this story actually have good grammar. Not too sure about the update stability, I'm used to the very long update period in FFN so this is not really a problem in my case but since Webnovel authors only write short chapters I was expecting this to be a daily update (Not really complaining btw). The story development in my opinion is what separates this story from the other multi-crossover slice of life fanfics. It actually shows the development of each characters. Nothing major yet mind you, but the interaction between the characters feels more genuine and realistic. I heard the others complaining about the MC being a beta, but in my eyes he's realistic than the rest. He's thinking things through and is not a horndog. MC doesn't feel like a Gary Stu or at least not yet (if the author somehow made a mistake). I don't even get why MC was labeled as a beta anyways, he wasn't even whipped to submission. I somehow feel like the word beta is misused these days. Just because the MC is not acting like horndog and is not very aggressive towards getting harem and having s*x makes people label those kind of MC as a beta. The other MC's of these genre are literally just trying to get girls, increase their harem, get ridiculously OP through their system cheat, get girls again, rinse and repeat. No developments whatsoever. This one is a gem buried underneath the pile of trashes in this platform. I hope the author continue trying to improve this gem and don't get discouraged from the reviews and comments of the dumb masses. This story is good and the author should keep up the great work. ...Also additional points cause I like Horimiya

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