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tempestpanda
tempestpandaAuthor4yr
2020-10-19 03:17

I mean if I don't give it five stars who will🤣, it a good long novel, Op Mc who is lazy, a lot of side characters with well good character building and a cat girl✌️

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DartUpdates
DartUpdatesLv14

Question, what are you revising exactly?

tempestpanda
tempestpandaAuthor

quality

DartUpdates:Question, what are you revising exactly?
TimeLiez
TimeLiezLv14

I'm a simple man you had me at cat girl

tempestpanda
tempestpandaAuthor

I see! a man of culture indeed!

TimeLiez:I'm a simple man you had me at cat girl
carlos123995
carlos123995Lv15

is the cat girl his employe or crush

tempestpanda
tempestpandaAuthor

employee for now

carlos123995:is the cat girl his employe or crush
QuestionableReadin
QuestionableReadinLv4

For now.... i see, anyways, is this going to be single girl or Man of Culture

tempestpanda:employee for now
Daoist_lazy_saint
Daoist_lazy_saintLv13

if a man of culture then awesome

QuestionableReadin:For now.... i see, anyways, is this going to be single girl or Man of Culture
tempestpanda
tempestpandaAuthor

not sure about that yet!

QuestionableReadin:For now.... i see, anyways, is this going to be single girl or Man of Culture
BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

quite a few ways to improve example have it as a regular cultivation novel and not trails every 20 levels is really stupid someone at level 16 automatically goes to level 20 for killing something 20 is idiotic have a blacklist in shop for those not following rules later when shop is more powerful have it s own currency/ loyalty card later when shop is more powerful have vending machines so that doesn't have to serve every customer have simple forms of entertainment sold In store packs of cards board games for silver only read to chapter 13 so far

BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

can you explain your cultivation system it makes no fucking sense

BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

why is there no pills in this kingdom is it because it's a very low-level/ weak kingdom

tempestpanda
tempestpandaAuthor

yes it's like lowest level thing

BrianG9677:why is there no pills in this kingdom is it because it's a very low-level/ weak kingdom
Natsu_dragneel_689
Natsu_dragneel_689Lv13

Just asking is the chapters gonna be longer one day? Its fine if you cant but its like, Im excited to read next chapter and then its gone in a sec and im waiting again and it sometimes takes like 5 short chapters to get to where ive been waiting for. The novel is awesome though, love it and its still definitely 5 stars

tempestpanda
tempestpandaAuthor

chapter are not going to be longer but after we hit the goal on patreón I'll start giving two chapters a day and the three 😊

Natsu_dragneel_689:Just asking is the chapters gonna be longer one day? Its fine if you cant but its like, Im excited to read next chapter and then its gone in a sec and im waiting again and it sometimes takes like 5 short chapters to get to where ive been waiting for. The novel is awesome though, love it and its still definitely 5 stars
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