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maxgonz
maxgonzLv124yr
2021-01-18 07:21

Honestly just read this novel because I was bored and I wasn't expecting much. But I must say wow, did this exceed my expectations. Although it is true that.grammar and writing could be polished the novel was entering throughout the whole 200+ chapters I have read so far. Plus it's completely free, compared to some novels in which writing quality is the same or worse and still put a pay wall. All in all definitely recommend, no paywall, intriguing story and although writing needs polishing definitely understandable and flows decently. P.S author I'm not sure if you have already but if not I would recommend you setting up a pattern if you're not gonna set up premium chapters, just add some benefits that come with supporting you and I'm sure you can make some befitting of your work!

Myriad Realms Grand Manager with a God Class System.

tempestpanda
4.4
537 Chs

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tempestpanda
tempestpandaAuthor

buddy, can you please point out some mistakes in the novel so that I can accept my mistakes and improve.😙

4yr
maxgonz
maxgonzLv12

No problem! The biggest thing is definitely grammar, that being said it has definitely improved through the story. But, you should definitely get and editor or you yourself to edit and fix some mistakes made earlier on especially. other than that it would be nice if you could make a more detailed explanation on how power rankings work in this world as I'm still largely confused on how they work (mostly don't understand the trial and the skill crystals). Other than that your work is great!

tempestpanda:buddy, can you please point out some mistakes in the novel so that I can accept my mistakes and improve.😙
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tempestpanda
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I mean if I don't give it five stars who will🤣, it a good long novel, Op Mc who is lazy, a lot of side characters with well good character building and a cat girl✌️

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Flaiver
FlaiverLv4

A good romance with an interesting story. Cheerful, not tense, relaxing. The only minus is the small number of chapters at the moment and their small size. And I like everything [img=recommend]. I recommend reading. I look forward to continuing.[img=update]

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Natsu_dragneel_689
Natsu_dragneel_689Lv13

Beautiful novel, op mc, system, shop with pills, equipment, vr (virtual reality for training), and upgrade room. Has a catgirl assistant, plot is great and not too tense and keeps you in wait for next chapter, updating stability is awesome (updated about one chapter every day). Only thing is chapters are really short but really doesn’t change how good the novel is, definitely should read if you are a fan of novels with shop owner op mc with system (or maybe if you just like cat girls :3)

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Saltybolty
SaltyboltyLv2

Grammar and overall sentence structure, is quite poor and broken. The depth or well how well the characters are portrayed is just rubbish at best, the mc has no personality and the overall theme is forced . The background and world building is just terrible, theres no description on the surrounding or the store. its basically just stringed together dog shit. The Systrm and Power levels are just poorly planned. System wise.... the author tries to make it money grubbing and shameless but just comes off as a poor RIP off.

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Psychjoke9753
Psychjoke9753Lv2

great novel,but chapters are too short.i think it's better than blach tech internet cafe, because it's fast paced.just give this novel a try.

4yr
john_someone
john_someoneLv11

not better than black tech Internet cafe but still a nice 9/10 also plus one for CATGIRL. Since the chapter is short read AT LEAST till chapter 60 to see if you like this.

4yr
AghoraRudra
AghoraRudraLv10

definitely remium material brother. author giving it without premiumizing is the best but still he also needs money to survive. so in my opinion author bro u can go premium and ill support u

4yr
hanginglaststraw
hanginglaststrawLv2

good novel. .................. it's a good novel. ........................... it's a really good novel. .....................................

4yr
kukulkhan
kukulkhanLv5

it's a reupload by the OP after fixing early chapters... thumbnail is cool! lazy MC .. like really lazy that remains lazy and uses all of his resources to keep his laze... I'm not sure if MC is more lazy than me... but I think I'm more lazy.

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