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Zack_Smith_9438
Zack_Smith_9438Lv103yr
2021-05-04 00:10

I respect the dxd arc but when he went to the Naruto arc he just turned from chill to villainous, it kind of threw me off, you should put it in the tags.

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Gilandcheese
GilandcheeseLv3

MC is evil?

Zack_Smith_9438
Zack_Smith_9438Lv10

When he started to the naruto arc his personality just did a 360

Gilandcheese:MC is evil?
Gilandcheese
GilandcheeseLv3

Oh.... thanks for the warning.

Zack_Smith_9438:When he started to the naruto arc his personality just did a 360
Randomlyrandom
RandomlyrandomLv14

that makes absolutely no f****** sense.

Zack_Smith_9438:When he started to the naruto arc his personality just did a 360
Zack_Smith_9438
Zack_Smith_9438Lv10

Try to think for once, it will make your life easier, I have no reason to explain what I said, as what I said was simple enough for a baby to understand.

Randomlyrandom:that makes absolutely no f****** sense.
Randomlyrandom
RandomlyrandomLv14

no! you f****** moron. a 360-degree turn means you go right back where you started. that's why I said it made no sense.

Zack_Smith_9438:Try to think for once, it will make your life easier, I have no reason to explain what I said, as what I said was simple enough for a baby to understand.
Aaron_Harvey_7275
Aaron_Harvey_7275Lv2

Annoying

Randomlyrandom:no! you f****** moron. a 360-degree turn means you go right back where you started. that's why I said it made no sense.
Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

hahaha

Zack_Smith_9438:Try to think for once, it will make your life easier, I have no reason to explain what I said, as what I said was simple enough for a baby to understand.
Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

right

Aaron_Harvey_7275:Annoying
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv11

that makes no sense.

Zack_Smith_9438
Zack_Smith_9438Lv10

How does it not? I made a small mistake, but even then it is easy to understand.

Demiurge_Ohara:that makes no sense.
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Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv11

you do know I'm talking about the angles right?

Zack_Smith_9438:How does it not? I made a small mistake, but even then it is easy to understand.
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv11

Randomlyrandom:no! you f****** moron. a 360-degree turn means you go right back where you started. that's why I said it made no sense.
esperomejorar
esperomejorarLv1

VILLANOOOO

Zack_Smith_9438
Zack_Smith_9438Lv10

Yes I do.

Demiurge_Ohara:you do know I'm talking about the angles right?
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv11

Zack_Smith_9438:Yes I do.
Litago
LitagoLv15

Is there a trigger to why he turns into a villain? If there is not that is just throwing a ball of paper into a trash can.

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