Aaron_Harvey_7275

An interesting concept, I went into this story thinking it would be poorly done, but I actually see decent grammar, and backstory written inside of it. As I am a fan of Elliot Jackson's other stories, I say give this one a chance. I have a quick question though, Is the ancient one going to be his girl, or is there going to be a breakup or something? The rest of the story is good, it's just the ancient one that I have a slight dislike to the mc's love interest,

Incredibly interesting story, one that is not fueled by the biases of their own opinion, but yet, does what he wants in a way that is explained, and understood, if it is not explained the author acknowledges it and makes way with his promise to explain it soon. This has to be one of the best books on the site and has the potential to be the greatest book of all keep up the good work author.

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Well...this story was very interesting to read, and I do thank you for posting. I do hope the negative feedback you get from others do not keep you from writing but motivates you to do better... I for one, know how hard it is to write a story, and for you to continue to complete this despite the low in ratings; you earned my respect.

Interesting I guess, Naruto fans made a lot of them over at fanfiction.net which was really amazing, That's not to say I didn't see bad ones, but the good far outway them. You can do a lot of good with it if done right, mostly easy to do if you put forth the effort and know what you're doing.

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Bro your killing me, just focus on one story, I don’t want you to tire yourself out.

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