Item: The Disastrous Life of a Gamer
Rating: 3.6

Kintaro498Lv43yr

2021-05-09 06:15

The only times I do reviews is when I really like something or I'm frustated with something, that being said, I'm frustated with this FF. The story is pretty cool, a lot of interesting elements that I've never seen before, BUT, there's one problem, there isn't ONE dialogue between two people in this story that sounds like a real conversation. Everytime the MC is alone the story is really good, if he's talking to someone, then the story tanks to a reeeally bad one. But hey, that's just my opinion, you could read it and still enjoy it, at the end of the day the people doing fanfic are not obligated to be god tier writers. Much love.

The Disastrous Life of a Gamer

MeatBunKun

4.5

87 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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latheef_shaikLv4

same here

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I'm really surprised that so many people like my novel and I want to thank you all for giving this novel a try and I appreciate all of the help you guys did to correct my mistakes or give me new ideas to implement.

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Zack_Smith_9438Lv10

I respect the dxd arc but when he went to the Naruto arc he just turned from chill to villainous, it kind of threw me off, you should put it in the tags.

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This was a great read at first and it was pretty good for the DXD ark but when the Naruto ark started the MC's personality took a 90 degree turn from a calm and chill guy to a villianous guy and also why does everyone hate on Rias because like most fanfictions that have DXD in it nowadays usually portray Rias as this villianous person that would sacrificed Issei to force him to become her slave or if that does not happen the MC would be a a*s kisser but in the anime Rias does not treat Issei as a slave and she only did what she did because it would benefit her and the whole Riser situation and also the MC is such a moron for no reason like he demands respect from one of the most powerful familys in the world and not from his own powers but from the powers of a butler that was given to him and that gives off the reason why the MC became somebody that is chill and calm but his personality turned into someone who once given power will exploit it to no end which includes demanding respect for having a backer that iis powerfuk but he is not that powerful and being arrogant then blaming people of why they are attacking him so overall this is a decent read for the DXD ark but when the Naruto ark starts it feels as if the Author just randomly added this ark into the story because he needed some content and it seemed rushed other than that and some other minor hiccups it is a decent read.

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Darius_ChromwellLv4

Love gamer fiction novels it was good with a nice class twist but started to feel boring after the introduction of the overpowered butler, plus the system felt neglected.

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Lucy_CarlaLv4

1. MC fight head on with devil faction, i say it stupid, he is weak but act like mighty young master, why dont he move temporary to other place ?? or have protection from other faction ?? because you pride to not "serve" ?? are mc too stupid to not know what it is deceptive or low-key and accumulating power ?? 2. in Naruto world , "MC is Genius on par with Nara clan..." thats jiraya opinion.. when you trying to be normal and reasonable , i bet jiraya also give you title "Genius".

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Mad respect to the dxd arc, Mad respect, but that's where it all goes down hill to me, the personality goes through a complete 180 when he reaches the Naruto arc, and catches me completely off guard. I keep hoping for the old mc personality to come back, but more and more, I find the mc's personality getting worse and worse. Dark Mc's are fine. But Don't just say "Hey, I want to be Dark!" Without going through anything. My 3 stars were out of respect to the dxd Arc. Good luck on your novel

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