it was a great fanfic before the MCU and Natasha came along. Creating and distributing his Evil Pieces doesn't even make sense for your character with his personality anymore. In general, your fanfic turned into a complete trash in just 2 chapters.
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he really is distributing his evil pieces? how do you mean? creating for everyone or just his lovers? or something completely different?
The MC made his own knock-off downgraded version of Evil Pieces and he used his first piece for Natasha.
Let's make an analogy! You have a burger and fries restaurant! A food critic will one day evaluate it. ------------------------------------------ Writing quality (Hamburger) Update stability (Place Cleanup) Story development (Treatment of employees) Character design (Restaurant design) World Background (French Fries, DxD and Marvel Worlds) ------------------------------------------- (1)The service was impeccable! (2) Cleanliness, I have never seen a cleaner restaurant in my life! (3) The hamburger was simply delicious! (4) Restaurant design, location and comfortable furniture. (5) But the fries, I didn't like it, I was upset! I'm giving this restaurant 1 star because of the fries. Even if the rest is good. Is the culinary critic being fair? Can he judge every restaurant, can it only cause he didn't like 1 of the 5 judgment parameters?
that's the worst analogy I've seen to date but I still understand what your getting at even though its less like fries and more like noticing a cockroach in the burger after taking a bite out of it, was the experience fine before discovering the bug, yes but after which its better to burn the establishment down.
Well...each one makes his own deductions about his own logic! Have a nice day!
Man, the person that made the comment is obviously a Karen, you can ignore them, not worth the time. I so far love your story, I just finished your Naruto fanfiction and loving this one so far considering you are actually doing world-building over here. Keep up the good work!
I've been reading for 8 to 10 years on the internet and if I read ONE review pointing something that I would not like and it's truly a fact -even if biased I would commend that review independent of how much biased that review was. The reason? Time. I dropped hundreds of novels mid way and that time would not be recovered -something even a biased review could have saved. Reviews are there to paint the reviewer's perspective, and they are OPEN to amateur reviewing.. so... no. that logic dont work on amateur open reviews, for a amateur fiction, and even more on fanfictions. Alas this review paints nothing about this novel, as the author replied to him and shutted him out like a cheap b.
