It’s a horrible crossover between DxD and MCU with mutants. Some people were defending this, but it brings a h*ll of a lot of problems. First: Plot holes, the author is going to have to completely change the Norse pantheon for it to even work. He’s going to have to explain why the ancient one hasn’t been involved. He’s going to have to explain whether or not mutants as devils is a thing. He’s going to have to explain if higher ups (like Fury) know of devils (which realistically he would). He going to have to completely change the Egyptian Pantheon due to moon knight. He’s going to have to explain Thor and Loki more. He’s going to have to explain if Ophis and Great Red even know of the outside universe (which they should). He’s also going to have to explain wth the dimensional gap is, and how someone like Dormammu hasn’t just killed Great red and taken it. 2nd: The timeline is now a clusterf*ck, he’s going to have to completely reorganize some events for them to make even the littlest bit of sense. 3rd: He’s going to have to explain how no one has ever found out about Devils, even with the technology they have. As there’s no way there isn’t a mistake here or there. Overall, this fsnfic is doomed to fail. And considering the MC in Naruto and how r*tarted he was, I don’t have much to any hope in this fsnfic.

i like it, thx author for new int story!ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ

before the release of the MCU it was very interesting... but then the author showed his dislike for the "heart" (girls) of the dxd world... and this ruined my whole fanfic experience as a dxd fan. I'd rather you write MCU fanfiction than an ugly dxd world with a disgusting crossover with a biased and bad opinion about the girls of the dxd world. Everyone who reads dxd fanfiction loves these girls... but seeing how you feel about them, I'm leaving. And it is necessary to write in the description that this is a crossover. It’s a pity that I didn’t like this fanfic, unlike the previous fanfic (fanfic about Naruto turned out to be very interesting)

it was a great fanfic before the MCU and Natasha came along. Creating and distributing his Evil Pieces doesn't even make sense for your character with his personality anymore. In general, your fanfic turned into a complete trash in just 2 chapters.

of all the stories why DxD was crossed with the MCU. .

I give up, that author start by describing the MC as a paranoid guy that don't trust his knowledge of DxD canon about Rias because she/Germony could be dangerous, he prepare dozens of backup plan before interacting with human mages/devil, but he sees Back widow once and everything goes out the window. He knows she ia a spy, but kidnaps her during one of her missions. Tells everything about supernatural to her (as if Shield never even saw one instance of supernatural) Resolve to trust her after seen her past a little after noticing that his ability to see the past is influence by himself, but for her only once is enough to trust her implicitly tell her about evil pieces and their mind control setting, say that he recreate then without the mind control and she accept it without prof. somehow convinces her that he is more trustworthy than Shield in one conversation prompting her to leave then. After several backup plan before meeting a Devil and always talking about how they aren't trustworthy, decided that introduce Natasha to his Devil associate without informing her of anything, giving the Devil a lot of information about himself. After every chapter Mc give her more information about himself without any explanation on why. I don't know what happened, after Marvel introduction, it feels like another author took control of this story.

It's an MCU x DxD crossover, if that's not your cup on tea, don't bother. Otherwise, the wiring style is decent, probably in the top 50% on writers on this site

Finally good story focused on human mage in dxd!Hope to see it continue. The plot so far mainly focuses on human magic side and I love it. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The MC believes that becouse he got money and conection he's untuchable.... DXD and MCU are going to cure he of that notiont becouse he's a weakling...