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Kyuuso
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2021-01-02 22:26

This is my first review on this site. I bothered to create an account just to write this review for a book I really love, and it was worth it. Many I love about this novel. The plot, characters, narrations, especially figure of speech, the way the author approach something ambiguously instead a direct and clear one, leaving readers to wonder what was implied in one paragraph and creating these massive paragraphs as the outcome. It's not really a bad thing, first maybe would make you feel a bit tired for reading such a long paragraphs, you simply just to adapt with it and things would become easier. It's not all the paragraphs were massive after all, only some that need to be described deeply. And I really love it. Back to the implied aspect, the author also cleverly used implied title as well in every chapters, if you noticed it. The novel title itself also implied "Sin of Kin" not only sound catchy, but I think there's some kind of sinister meaning behind it. A sin of her kin which is devil, or a sin of humans kin, or maybe others beings that "casting its shades of grey". My gut telling me that our little devil MC maybe doesn't really have the so-called angel heart. Why I can say that? It from the latest two chapters ---or maybe three if the author already upload it in the future--- anyhow, the point is in that long chapter titled "A Demure Sin" which was divided into sub-chapters right now. Not gonna spoil it, because the title already spoke for itself. Not only the novel that amazing, but its author as well. One kind of literal humble author. The author never ever telling and asking and begging constantly to his/her readers to vote, comment, or add his/her novel into the readers library. Never. Which is kinda rare and uncommon to find in this site who craved for things like that. That's why I love both the novel and like its humble author. Phew~ this review's kinda long, isn't it? Gonna end it here. Despite its low upload rate compare to the standard novel found in this site, this novel is worth waiting. After all, the author seemed to upload each chapter no less than 2k words per week, even there are chapter that have more than 2k. I think it's the same as uploading 500-1000 words chapters every day or two. To close this review I need only say one thing to the author. Keep writing no matter what. Thank you for providing us a great story to read.

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Houraji
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Thank you for your a review... A long yet helpful one. I'm really glad you enjoyed my humble story. Where to begin? I think from your mentioned about the implied thingy since I saw that you really caught its meaning. I could say your gut right or wrong, since you implemented the tittle of the novel was hit right on the target, moreover I already put an emphasis in "casting its shades of grey" and "the gray thread" in the synopsis. Basically, nothing evil or good. That's it, no further explanation. And about me being a humble author is not true. I am selfish, and also crave for vote (or power stones in this site terms), comments, and put my novel in your library. I do sometimes visit review swab site to look for an obvious thing. Every authors deserve it after all the time they spend to give us a good story to read. But again, for me now, it's really not important anymore. For you, and all who came to read my novel is more than enough. I write mainly not to look for fame nor popularity, I simply want to write a novel to put my thought into a narrative which can be enjoyed by everyone. And realizing that there's someone who waiting for a new chapter, enough to give me a reason to open my two eyes every morning. That's why, I really thank you. Despite have to wait such a long time. God, I hope my exams this early years would gone quickly, so that I can greet the holiday for increasing my update rate.

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Scyfer
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It's very rare to find a book that implements philosophical reference, these days. Right after I noticed the title of the first volume, I instantly knew if it was based on a work of René Descartes. He was such a great philosopher indeed. As the synopsis says, "The crimson thread will begin to roll... casting its shades of gray." My guess this story would not lead into your typical good guy vs bad guy. No. It would become more complex than that. "Moral Dilemmas" as the author first mentioned in the 21st chapter, and the more chapters will be brought to us, the more it became blur and obscure. The border between evil and virtue will become vague. The MC really fit into this belief. A demon girl who is somehow contradicting to her born-nature. An angelic demon, you could say. But the thing is... not that simple. She seemingly has a helpful, kind-hearted manner, not because she is a demon on the outside and an angel on the inside, but because she thinks... simple as that. Then again, all of it are related to René Descartes works. You'd better read this story firsthand to comprehend what I mean. It's really worth it. As I really love the plot, the written narrative and characters description - from what the characters are doing, body language, behavior, their way of think and et cetera - are perfectly served, especially how the author put his/her own thoughts in some chapters. The grammar however, yet I can understand since the author isn't the native english speaker - so am I - nothing to complain. Despite a few mistakes, the story is still easy to understand. Then last but not least, the author seems worried about the low upload rate compare to other. Here's my little note for you, the author, "Don't compare yourself with others. There's no comparison between the sun and the moon. They shine when when it's their time." In conclusion, keep writing at your own pace, do it at a speed that is comfortable for you. I don't mind waiting a week or so for a single chapter because I know it will going to be ripe. A good chapter and a great story take time after all.

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